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You Move Me
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You Move Me |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
You stir in me A thousand echoes Of a thousand kisses And a thousand tomorrows Emotions in long decay Ever by slow degrees Never have I felt this way You move me You unlock in me So much of desire So much pain In which we conspire Memories betray innocence Ever by slow degrees Unafraid of the consequence You move me You instill in me A taste for life renewing A taste from depths Of which is my undoing Feelings long kept secret Ever by slow degrees Whatever it is, you do it You move me |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A beautiful poem of love! Very lovely! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a truly beautiful poem, I was touched by the emotions of love for another in it...very nice Janet Marie |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML.... this is wonderful. I lke it very much! -SEA |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Shuffling around in past posts, I stumbled across this one...quite the heart warming read I needed today. Nice to melt the interior ice too.  Sherry "The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. Yet, we do not treat ourselves nor another thus tenderly." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JML- This moved me very deeply. A magical formula at work. Slow, soft ... captured by degrees. Nice work. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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d.schultz Junior Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 43 |
JML- I look so forwarded to reading your poetry.... I enjoyed this one as well as the other ones.... for what I can't say you seem to saying them for me.... look forward to more.... ds |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Guys, thanks so much for making me feel welcome here, and my poems worthwhile. Glad i could melt some ice for you Sherry. Thanks Marge, your kindness moves me. And Schultz, i hope my poems i will be posting can keep you reading... Thanks. |
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