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You Move Me

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 01-24-2000 12:01 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

You stir in me
A thousand echoes
Of a thousand kisses
And a thousand tomorrows

Emotions in long decay
Ever by slow degrees
Never have I felt this way
You move me

You unlock in me
So much of desire
So much pain
In which we conspire

Memories betray innocence
Ever by slow degrees
Unafraid of the consequence
You move me

You instill in me
A taste for life renewing
A taste from depths
Of which is my undoing

Feelings long kept secret
Ever by slow degrees
Whatever it is, you do it
You move me

© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-24-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A beautiful poem of love! Very lovely!

Denise
Janet Marie
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2 posted 01-24-2000 12:36 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

this is a truly beautiful poem,
I was touched by the emotions of love for another in it...very nice Janet Marie
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3 posted 01-24-2000 01:43 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

JML.... this is wonderful. I lke it very much! -SEA
simplyYRREHS
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4 posted 01-29-2000 06:00 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

Shuffling around in past posts, I stumbled across this one...quite the heart warming read I needed today.  Nice to melt the interior ice too.  


Sherry

 "The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. Yet, we do not treat ourselves nor another thus tenderly." ~Henry David Thoreau

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 01-29-2000 07:10 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JML-
This moved me very deeply.
A magical formula at work.
Slow, soft ... captured by degrees.
Nice work.
~*Marge*~


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d.schultz
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6 posted 01-29-2000 08:16 PM       View Profile for d.schultz   Email d.schultz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for d.schultz

JML- I look so forwarded to reading your poetry....  I enjoyed this one as well as the other ones.... for what I can't say you seem to saying them for me....  look forward to more.... ds
PoeticKnight
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7 posted 02-01-2000 09:35 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Guys, thanks so much for making me feel welcome here, and my poems worthwhile.
Glad i could melt some ice for you Sherry.
Thanks Marge, your kindness moves me.
And Schultz, i hope my poems i will be posting can keep you reading...
Thanks.
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