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Raindrops

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vandana
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0 posted 01-24-2000 11:01 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


As I woke up this morning,
I saw the dark clouds
As they rolled by,
It was dark and misty,
This morning,

Looking at the sky ,
Where my heart captured the soul,
Yet,It was dark enough to
poured the rain down
on my checks,

Standing outside
As the raindrops fell on my checks,
My heart treambled with the fear
I have inside my heart,

The rain's still pouring,
As my tears fell on my checks,
Wondererd how the time will fly by,
As the years go by slowly,

My heart with the love  I have,
Yet ,the rain drop is still pouring,
Standing outside through the misty morning,
Bringing  my memories back,
Singing my heart
With the joy and laughter,

Whisper of the raindrops
through the misty morning,
The echo through the wind calling,
out a whistle ,
Raindrops falling on my head,
Bringing back my memories,
As I captured my heart for you,
Raindrops ,yet, keep falling
on my head,
Raindrops


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Denise
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1 posted 01-24-2000 11:32 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, melancholy poem, Vandana. It is so beautiful!

Denise
Elizabeth Santos
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since 11-08-1999
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2 posted 01-24-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

WEll, now. Didn't I tell you? Beautiful thoughts and beautifully expressed, proving my point without a reasonable doubt
I rest my case
Liz
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This speaks of sadness  
Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
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Canyon Country, CA


4 posted 01-24-2000 04:18 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Raindrops keep falling on my head, but that doesnt mean my eyes will soon be turning red, crying's not for me, oh.....Such a  beautiful poem Vandana!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

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