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vandana
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0 posted 2000-01-24 11:01 AM



As I woke up this morning,
I saw the dark clouds
As they rolled by,
It was dark and misty,
This morning,

Looking at the sky ,
Where my heart captured the soul,
Yet,It was dark enough to
poured the rain down
on my checks,

Standing outside
As the raindrops fell on my checks,
My heart treambled with the fear
I have inside my heart,

The rain's still pouring,
As my tears fell on my checks,
Wondererd how the time will fly by,
As the years go by slowly,

My heart with the love  I have,
Yet ,the rain drop is still pouring,
Standing outside through the misty morning,
Bringing  my memories back,
Singing my heart
With the joy and laughter,

Whisper of the raindrops
through the misty morning,
The echo through the wind calling,
out a whistle ,
Raindrops falling on my head,
Bringing back my memories,
As I captured my heart for you,
Raindrops ,yet, keep falling
on my head,
Raindrops



© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-24 11:32 AM


Beautiful, melancholy poem, Vandana. It is so beautiful!

Denise

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
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2 posted 2000-01-24 11:46 AM


WEll, now. Didn't I tell you? Beautiful thoughts and beautifully expressed, proving my point without a reasonable doubt
I rest my case
Liz

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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3 posted 2000-01-24 12:00 PM


This speaks of sadness  
Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
4 posted 2000-01-24 04:18 PM


Raindrops keep falling on my head, but that doesnt mean my eyes will soon be turning red, crying's not for me, oh.....Such a  beautiful poem Vandana!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


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