»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #5
»
To Feel Alive
| Open Poetry #5 |
|
To Feel Alive |
|
|
PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Strip away the dirt from me That always holds me down Wash me clean completely Let the ashes fall to the ground Give comfort from your arms Shelter from the cold wind blowing With unbound hope and whispered charms Renew blood that had stopped flowing Better to feel pain from stricken heart Than to laugh instead of cry Better to let things run their course Than to feel dead instead of alive One touch is all that is needed Upon the heart, death defeated |
||
| © Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very well written i enjoyed the flow. Richard |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
