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Thy Fair Luna

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PoeticKnight
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Luna, thy beauty is fair
Indeed fairer by far
Than for just what you are
Surely not how bright or rare
Nor your constant repair

More so than any mortal device
Is the reason I hold you dear
For your beauty indisputably clear
Those virtues can be counted thrice
No, something else must suffice

It is not outward appearance descried
Which strengthens your beauty
To confess this, I feel is my duty
To me your fairness is found inside
Fair, for how you make me feel tonight
© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
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Welcome to Passions, JML! Lovely poem! Thanks for sharing it with us! Please check your email for a very special welcome!

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Very nice... Welcome! *S*
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Welcome to passions...lovely poem  
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4 posted 01-24-2000 12:35 PM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

enjoyed your poem.

 You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel. Carol King
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VERY NICE!

WELCOME
Look forward to reading
more of your work!
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