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what goes around comes around (not sure if this one works???)

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fc
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0 posted 01-24-2000 09:48 AM       View Profile for fc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for fc

he/I  tell(s) me/you
that he/I love(s) me/you
enough to want to be
just friends
if that is all we can be
and I/you say sure
I/you want that too...

but I don't.

not really.

I want to be as far away
from his you don't love me
pain filled eyes
as I can get
and I so have to wonder



[This message has been edited by fc (edited 01-24-2000).]
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spiked
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1 posted 01-24-2000 10:08 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

kind of hard to read but i get what your going for.
Pick one of the two and write from that view and it will be more enjoyable.
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