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Seeing Eyes

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whiskey
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0 posted 01-24-2000 08:04 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

" Seeing Eyes "

Visions dancing
Across my mind
Seeing you
Holding me

Pictures Seen
Inside my head
Seeing you
Kissing me

Sight I can feel
With in my brain
Seeing you
Wanting me

Memory Flooding
Into my thought
Seeing you
Loving me
© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 01-24-2000 10:59 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Whiskey...I think this is one of your best. Nicely done  
Denise
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2 posted 01-24-2000 12:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, Whiskey, this is so beautiful, I agree! One of your best!

Denise
Janet Marie
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3 posted 01-24-2000 12:46 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

these are my favorite kinds of poems...filled with memories of love.
this is beautiful. Janet Marie
HelmutB
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4 posted 01-24-2000 01:19 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

So very cute this poem there is
to love and be loved is such a bliss
Well done, now don't get frisky
Rather step up to the bar there Wiskey

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

whiskey
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5 posted 01-24-2000 07:18 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thank you everyone your replies mean alot  

Helmut,  Line em up mate , lol
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6 posted 01-25-2000 06:27 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Hi,Whisky,I really like your stlye of writing.Check your e-mail.
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