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I Feel Your Pain

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spiked
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0 posted 01-23-2000 10:55 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for spiked

I feel your pain
I see your hurt
I want so much
To quench your thirst
To fix that pain that hurts inside
To hold you, help you ease your mind
To show you love and help you see
You are my one, the world to me
I save these thoughts for you my dear
They are the ones I hold most near
My Heart.



 Richard Rendall
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Denise
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1 posted 01-23-2000 11:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful poem, Richard!  

Denise
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I agree with dsnyder, very beautiful!
Echo Rhayne
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Richard, this was beautiful and touching!  Whoever t was written for (if anyone) is quite the lucky one!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

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I am reminded of my friend.  He has such a kind heart, yet no one to share it with. And I feel him pain.  Thank you for this wonderful poem
spiked
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5 posted 01-24-2000 09:45 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thank you Denise, Tulip, echo and one
Sometimes a kind heart suffers more than a cold heart because its so vulnerable yet I wouldn't change the way I am for I can love far more than a cold heart ever will.
hoot_owl_rn
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Oh Richard...this is most romantic. Lovely verse and heart felt thoughts  
spiked
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Thank you hoot
From you I consider it a large compliment.
Richard
 
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