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haiku 001

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Beki
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0 posted 01-23-2000 10:39 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beki


Under August's moon
twilight blush of yellow rose -
descending desire.
© Copyright 2000 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
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This is beautiful, Beki!


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Well then, it could just be that I'm a bit on the -- um -- unbridled side tonight, but I found this to be a bit racier than your average haiku!!  

Lovely as usual, you are the unchallenged master (mistress?) of haiku -- oh and welcome back, BTW, I've missed your work!  

--Kess


 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

Beki
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Thank you Denise, and you're right Kess, it is a little racier than your average haiku...but a lot of mine are   I am glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the compliment too.
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Beautiful  
Beki
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Thank you again, my friend  
 
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