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The Jackal
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0 posted 01-23-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

do what you HAVE to do
do what you ALWAYS do
just dont THINK of only you
for the WOUNDS you heal today
dont promise a BETTER tomorrow
or keep you from FADING away...

© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 01-23-2000 11:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

It surely makes for a poor relationship with the emphasis always on one person.  

Denise
Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 01-24-2000 01:40 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Good points, and I must agree with Denise here  

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

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Simple sweet words of advice to be used a guidelines when in doubt.

Great poem
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4 posted 01-24-2000 01:45 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Very true dear, I think you emphasized the right words in this one!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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