Response to Hoot's challenge "In the moonlight, shadows dancing"

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Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2000-01-23 08:35 PM

Weary stars stand still while glancing,
As their eyelids freeze with frost.
Arms and legs and fates have crossed,
In the moonlight-- shadows dancing.

Carved upon the pale wall
As though ancient hieroglyphics--
Phantoms of the sleepless evenings
In eternity enthralled.

One more step and we will soar,
All is spinning, all is twirling.
Shapes of shadows, spinning, whirling,
In the moonlight, on the floor.

In the twilight’s masquerade,
Hungry eyes light up the night
They declare with silent pride,
“Rather burn than simply fade.”

Kevin

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since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

1 posted 2000-01-23 08:53 PM

again master=)
again

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-01-23 09:17 PM

Well done, Master! Welcome to the 'dancing circle'......one more guy that we snared...hehehehe....

Take your bow! *clapping*

Denise

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-01-23 09:32 PM

Master-

You've done the waltz in the moonlight,
a twirl around the garden of shadows.
A lovely acceptance of the challenge.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2000-01-23 10:03 PM

Wow! You guys are really doing it in style! Good one!

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2000-01-23 10:13 PM

Wow...you guys all have me speachless here. I never thought so many would take me up on my challange or that I'd get such a fine array of poetry.
Challange well met Master

First__Knight
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 678

6 posted 2000-01-23 10:19 PM

Oh yes....a real work of art in this Master

I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because
people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking
into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary
insanity.

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

7 posted 2000-01-23 10:45 PM

I am hoping that it is alright to reply even though I wasn't invited to the challenge. Romantic, sensual, movement throughout. Delectably original and superb in its presentation.

Dear Lady

Claire

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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8 posted 2000-01-23 10:57 PM

Claire - check your email!!

Denise

Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

9 posted 2000-01-23 11:02 PM

This has been some challenge, eh? I haven't read one response to it yet that I haven't enjoyed thoroughly ...

... and this, of course, is no exception. I'm dizzy from all the twirling and whirling! Wonderful verse!

--Kess

Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...

--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

10 posted 2000-01-23 11:29 PM

This was a pretty cool challenge. Thank you all for the comments, glad you enjoyed this one!

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