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shadows dancing (hoots challenge)

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Kevin
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0 posted 01-23-2000 07:32 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

In the moonlight, shadows dancing
splendors silver on the page
of a poem that's so entrancing
knows no limits, knows no age

words that linger ever after
found upon a tired tongue
words of tears, and words of laughter
words of songs long left unsung

shadows dancing from the moonlight
upon the words that find there way
into my heart into the night
into the depths of yesterday


[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 01-23-2000).]
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1 posted 01-23-2000 07:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, Kevin, this is lovely! Welome to our 'dancing' circle!  

Well, that's two guys! Any more takers?

Denise
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Wonderful Kevin!
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Kevin-
So pleased to see the ~Moonlight~
that ~Dances~ through your mind.

~*Marge*~


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Kevin
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im sure we'll be in close company soon d =)

thank you martie =)

marge.. im gonna have to take you to metaphors annonymous if you dont cut that out lol hehe
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Kevin, this is beautiful......challange well met. I'm loving all the variety of poetry coming from one line  
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Nicely done!!! Congratulations! I like this.. it fairly sings!  
 
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