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Kevin
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0 posted 2000-01-23 07:32 PM


In the moonlight, shadows dancing
splendors silver on the page
of a poem that's so entrancing
knows no limits, knows no age

words that linger ever after
found upon a tired tongue
words of tears, and words of laughter
words of songs long left unsung

shadows dancing from the moonlight
upon the words that find there way
into my heart into the night
into the depths of yesterday


[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 01-23-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-23 07:35 PM


Oh, Kevin, this is lovely! Welome to our 'dancing' circle!  

Well, that's two guys! Any more takers?

Denise

Martie
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2 posted 2000-01-23 07:38 PM


Wonderful Kevin!
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3 posted 2000-01-23 07:41 PM


Kevin-
So pleased to see the ~Moonlight~
that ~Dances~ through your mind.

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kevin
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4 posted 2000-01-23 07:45 PM


im sure we'll be in close company soon d =)

thank you martie =)

marge.. im gonna have to take you to metaphors annonymous if you dont cut that out lol hehe

hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 2000-01-23 09:52 PM


Kevin, this is beautiful......challange well met. I'm loving all the variety of poetry coming from one line  
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6 posted 2000-01-23 10:02 PM


Nicely done!!! Congratulations! I like this.. it fairly sings!  

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