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SEA
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0 posted 2000-01-23 04:32 PM



As I was sitting
something caught my eye
as it softly went
fluttering by

Looking to see
what had caught my eye
I saw a beautiful
Butterfly

Gently dancing
through the air
suddenly I became
quite aware

The Butterfly's Dance
was an expression of love
given to us
by the Lord above.
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1 posted 2000-01-23 04:33 PM


Bingo!  Great thought written in perfect meter.

Sherry

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau



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2 posted 2000-01-23 04:40 PM


Gentle and lovely poem! Beautiful!

Denise

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3 posted 2000-01-23 04:43 PM


SEA-
Nothing strikes my fancy
as much as butterflies.
You've sent one fluttering
across my mind.
Thank you ...
this is just lovely.
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 2000-01-23 04:47 PM


Ladies, I'm glad you liked this. My Mom used to call me her little catapillar. Now that I am older, I am her Butterfly. Kinda like calling me her ugly duckling HA HA   -SEA
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5 posted 2000-01-23 04:50 PM


This is a sweet and thoughtful poem.  I enjoyed it's flutter.

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