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Dancing Shadows In The Moonlight *Hoot's Challenge*

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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 01-23-2000 03:09 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

  
Softly through the window
rays of moonbeams touch my face
Shadowed by the memories of
another time
another
place
~
In the moonlight
shadows dancing
reminding me of love
once glancing
back at me through
anothers eyes
lit with promise
and surprise
~
Love
that made my
heart dance freely
now merely shadows
dancing in the moonlight
~
In
the moonlight
shadows dancing
touching shadows
of another time
with promises
of love
~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 01-23-2000 03:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, Marge, this is soooooo beautiful!! Well done!

Denise
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2 posted 01-23-2000 03:19 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Soft, lilting, and sweetly sad.  Well done.

--Kess


 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

Dark Angel
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3 posted 01-23-2000 03:19 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Marge, you are truly amazing, this is absolutley beautiful!!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Martie
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4 posted 01-23-2000 03:23 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Oh so lovely Marge!
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 01-23-2000 03:36 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Denise-
Lovely
challenge
to work from.
That Hoot girl
sure knows how to
inspire us all.
Thanks for
liking.

Skyfyre-
Lilting is
my favorite
word. Thanks
for applying it
to this piece.
It sure was
such a fun
piece to
do.

DarkAngel-

I don't
know about
amazing ...
but perhaps I'm
AMAZED that we
have such a
beautiful
place to
share

Martie-

And the
shadows
just keep
dancing just
beyond our reach.
Closer, closer
they come
Got to
have
one.




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Munda
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6 posted 01-23-2000 03:41 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Made me quiet for a while and go back into time. Memories soft and loving. Thank you Marge   A wonderful poem.
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 01-23-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, Munda
Hope the trip was
a pleasant one. Memories
take us where they want us
to be.  Thank you for the
softness of your reply.
I'm so glad that it
presented you with
a reflective
moment.



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mike
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8 posted 01-23-2000 05:05 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

From forth thy lips flows the beauty of the night.  Beautiful work.
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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9 posted 01-23-2000 05:43 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

This poem is exquisitely written!  You are such a gifted poet!  I always search out your work, and am rewarded with such treats!
Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 01-23-2000 06:32 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Marge
I have been reading but not responding these days, but I have to respond to this one. It is so beautiful, I've read it over and over
Love
Liz
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 01-23-2000 06:43 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mike-
How eloquent thy praise.
Lady *demurely* bows
Thank you, sir.

Rosemary-
You know what your words mean to me.

While I always 'colored outside the lines'
I want my words to speak first and then
the presentation to  WOW you !

I am constantly inspired to jump with
abandon at formatting after having seen
the lovely work you and Dale present on
your pages.  Thank you, Rosemary for the
sincerity of your comments.

Elizabeth, my friend -
Thanks, darling.  It's just nice knowing
you are out there reading.
Love to you and to Tony.

~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Bad Boy
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12 posted 01-23-2000 06:46 PM       View Profile for Bad Boy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bad Boy

Marge,
I have read several of your writing`s and one thought keep`s coming to mind.
You have had a bad experience with love?
Im sorry if Im out of line with this comment.
It`s just that I read your work and from that alone I can see that your a sweet,loving,kind hearted person and I just can`t imagine anyone ever breaking the heart of one that has so much to offer.
If so,you just point him out and I`ll go smack`m for you.
Very well written Marge
I look forward to the next one  



 The Devil Made Me Do It.

Meadowmuse
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You've written a wonderfully reflective, sentimental poem...took me back to the beginnings of a love, sweet and new. Thank you, Marge.

claire
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Marge...this is absolutely wonderful!!!! Wow, did you live up to the challange. I love it  
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