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In Dreams |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
My eyes are closed in search of sleep, And hidden dreams that I still keep. Then one more time I see you there To bring more visions for us to share. Along the shoreline hand in hand. Walking barefoot in the sand. To the crystal castle beneath a gentle sky. We soar on wings and fly up high. Pierced with the tip of cupid's dart. To you, alone, I give my heart. The pounding of our hearts, race against the wind. As the flames of love are rekindled again. Like a beacon in the night, I see you here within my sight. You are so close, yet out of touch. My heart still yearns for you so much. The reflections of these memories Soothes and puts this soul at ease. But, once again my heart will break When dreams subside, and I have to wake. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Eloise, Enjoyed the read and I hope your dream comes true. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise- This one hits home with a lady that sometimes hates to awaken from so lovely a dream. Beautiful ! Go back to sleep ... 'perchance to dream again.' ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is lovely  |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Seymour, Ruth thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Marge, thank you. I know what you mean. It seems, so many times, just at a good point in our dream we awaken. |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
What is life without dreams? Lovely poem! |
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Bad Boy Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 78 |
Don`t you hate it when thing`s are going better than you could ever imagine and then you wake up? Very nicely done. I hope someone(hopefuly female)has dreams like that of me  Dang,did I just say that?  All this love in here is really bad for my Bad Boy image.  The Devil Made Me Do It. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful dream, Eloise! I hope it becomes your reality! Denise |
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Altameria Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 22Whitby, Ontario, Canada |
loved the poem; i can relate. Sweet dreams! pattie ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ living in a dreamworld is where i long to be alone with my true love just him and me |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Beautiful dreams.....Love it I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary insanity. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
If only life could go as dreams do. Your poem is very beautiful and I enjoyed it much. Thanks Richard |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Anne - Thank you. I agree. We have to have something to look forward to. Bad Boy - I truly believe you are a softie at heart! Thank you. Denise - I hope so too, thank you. Altameria - I'm glad you like it. Sweet dreams to you too. Thank you First Knight. Richard - that would be nice, wouldn't it. Thank you. |
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