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Eloise
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0 posted 01-23-2000 10:16 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Eloise

My eyes are closed in search of sleep,
And hidden dreams that I still keep.
Then one more time I see you there
To bring more visions for us to share.

Along the shoreline hand in hand.
Walking barefoot in the sand.
To the crystal castle beneath a gentle sky.
We soar on wings and fly up high.

Pierced with the tip of cupid's dart.
To you, alone, I give my heart.
The pounding of our hearts, race against the wind.
As the flames of love are rekindled again.

Like a beacon in the night,
I see you here within my sight.
You are so close, yet out of touch.
My heart still yearns for you so much.

The reflections of these memories
Soothes and puts this soul at ease.
But, once again my heart will break
When dreams subside, and I have to wake.
© Copyright 2000 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 01-23-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Eloise,
Enjoyed the read and I hope your dream comes true.
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 01-23-2000 11:11 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Eloise-
This one hits home with a lady
that sometimes hates to awaken from
so lovely a dream.

Beautiful !
Go back to sleep ...
'perchance to dream again.'


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hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 01-23-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This is lovely  
Eloise
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4 posted 01-23-2000 12:20 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Seymour, Ruth thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Marge, thank you. I know what you mean.  It seems, so many times, just at a good point in our dream we awaken.  
Anne
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5 posted 01-23-2000 12:28 PM       View Profile for Anne   Email Anne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Anne

What is life without dreams?
Lovely poem!
Bad Boy
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6 posted 01-23-2000 12:44 PM       View Profile for Bad Boy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bad Boy

Don`t you hate it when thing`s are going better than you could ever imagine and then you wake up?
Very nicely done.
I hope someone(hopefuly female)has dreams like that of me
Dang,did I just say that?
All this love in here is really bad for my
Bad Boy image.



 The Devil Made Me Do It.

Denise
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7 posted 01-23-2000 02:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful dream, Eloise! I hope it becomes your reality!

Denise
Altameria
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loved the poem; i can relate. Sweet dreams!

         pattie

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
living in a dreamworld
is where i long to be
alone with my true love
just him and me
First__Knight
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9 posted 01-24-2000 02:38 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Beautiful dreams.....Love it  

 
I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because
people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking
into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary
insanity.


spiked
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10 posted 01-24-2000 10:05 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

If only life could go as dreams do.
Your poem is very beautiful and I enjoyed it much. Thanks
Richard
Eloise
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11 posted 01-25-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Anne - Thank you.  I agree.  We have to have something to look forward to.
Bad Boy - I truly believe you are a softie at heart!  Thank you.
Denise - I hope so too, thank you.
Altameria - I'm glad you like it. Sweet dreams to you too.
Thank you First Knight.  
Richard  - that would be nice, wouldn't it. Thank you.
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