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freeverse
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0 posted 01-23-2000 06:44 AM       View Profile for freeverse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freeverse

I shouldnt have fallen for you right from the start.
but how was I to know that you'd break my heart.
You came into my life when I was lonely and sad.
You made me happy like no one ever had.
You said that you would never make me cry.
You promised me that your love would never die.

But you turned out to be such a heartbreaker.
You threw our love away and left me for another girl.
I couldnt help crying each and every night.
I felt so alone without you by my side.

Why do you have to be a heartbreaker ?
Did you ever love me or do you only love her ?
I gave all my love to you
just to discover that your love is not true.

Why do you have to be a heartbreaker ..

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Bad Boy
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1 posted 01-23-2000 07:24 AM       View Profile for Bad Boy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bad Boy

Im guessing that you just lost a lover to another?
Im sorry,I really do feel for you.
Don`t it just make you wanna smack`m a good one?
You have worded your feeling`s well here.
I know thing`s will get better for you soon.
Just don`t give up.
Hey ya wanna share a toke and laugh about his loss? ok      
Now don`t you feel better? Yea I remember my first toke too. Hey slow down.
A toke after a good laugh always taste so good. Or was that a smoke after something?
Oh well.
Just remember it`s his loss.

  


 The Devil Made Me Do It.






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2 posted 01-23-2000 02:28 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

freeverse...... Getting your heart broke only goes to show you that you have one. If it can break-it too can heal.   -SEA
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3 posted 01-23-2000 04:08 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful poem, full of the hurt of a lost love. It is his loss, to be sure! Again, wonderful poem!

Denise
 
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