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First__Knight
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0 posted 2000-01-23 06:29 AM


I wrote this while sitting outside my work in a dark parking lot.  


On my way to you
~First Knight~

As I sit alone,
in a space meant for a car,
The darkness outside fills my eyes.

And as my eyes close....
My heart calls out so loud and strong,
"Take me to her,
I am not complete."
"Let her feel me,
and to live by her touch."

Pretending the breeze is you,
Softy running over all of me.
My tears fall in the darkness.

Your to good to be true,
and yet you call my name so clear.
I want to be in your arms and my responsibilities,
They trap me here.

How can I put aside these things of you,
as if these daily things are more.

What is more important than you?
"Nothing.....
Nothing I say"
As I place each foot down,
with the placement of an artist.
And make my way to you,
Know that you are the most
important thing in my life.

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I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because
people kill people.  That's and animal instinct. I think breaking
into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary
insanity.




[This message has been edited by First__Knight (edited 01-23-2000).]

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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2000-01-23 06:58 AM


David-

I can feel the wanting and the
longing to join with one you love.
It will come.  
Smile ...  
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2000-01-23 07:55 AM


FK, WOW I too can feel the wanting and the longing here, I can relate. Just don't let go!!   Beautiful poem FK!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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The Hague, The Netherlands
3 posted 2000-01-23 08:24 AM


A beautiful poem. I enjoyed this a lot.
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-01-23 08:31 AM


David...Life is a balance and it is choices. Time will tell which direction your feet move. My hope for you is that you make the decision before circumstances make it for you. My luck and love to you my friend.  
PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
5 posted 2000-01-23 09:57 AM


Very beautifully expressed my friend. I hope you find your way to her arms soon.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



First__Knight
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6 posted 2000-01-23 10:22 AM


Thank you Marge, Dark Angel , Munda.

Yes Marilyn I know where I want to be....and getting there is the hard part.  My job, my family ( What I have...which is not much), my finacial well being.  They keep me here for now.  Securing that and I will soon be there    She knows I am coming......How can I not?  Thank you so much

Thank you too Wildchild

 
I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because
people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking
into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary
insanity.



Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2000-01-23 10:56 AM


First,
Enjoyed the read.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
8 posted 2000-01-23 11:07 AM


Oh Darling...this is lovely. I know there are things that need to be worked out and I am patient...Now get here!!!...lol
Seriously, thank you for this and for saying "Know that you are the most
important thing in my life"
I love you,
Ruth


 At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato

Martie
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California
9 posted 2000-01-23 11:15 AM


One footstep at a time makes you wise and strong--Feelings are so strong in this FK and beautiful.
Denise
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10 posted 2000-01-23 03:15 PM


This is romantic and beautiful!!  

Denise

Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA
11 posted 2000-01-23 06:03 PM


Oh so beautiful and touching...Wanna give my boyfriend a few pointers LoL.  Quite an excellent poem, for quite an excellent person!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~



First__Knight
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Posts 678

12 posted 2000-01-23 10:12 PM


Thank you Sy and Denise
Martie....Yes on in front of the other.

Echo...I get all my pointers from Ruth.  

Ruth--Even though this is more of random thoughts spread upon this page....They are ever so real.  And I thank you so for your never ending understanding and waiting

 
I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because
people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking
into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary
insanity.



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