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First__Knight
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0 posted 01-23-2000 06:29 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for First__Knight

I wrote this while sitting outside my work in a dark parking lot.  


On my way to you
~First Knight~

As I sit alone,
in a space meant for a car,
The darkness outside fills my eyes.

And as my eyes close....
My heart calls out so loud and strong,
"Take me to her,
I am not complete."
"Let her feel me,
and to live by her touch."

Pretending the breeze is you,
Softy running over all of me.
My tears fall in the darkness.

Your to good to be true,
and yet you call my name so clear.
I want to be in your arms and my responsibilities,
They trap me here.

How can I put aside these things of you,
as if these daily things are more.

What is more important than you?
"Nothing.....
Nothing I say"
As I place each foot down,
with the placement of an artist.
And make my way to you,
Know that you are the most
important thing in my life.



 
I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because
people kill people.  That's and animal instinct. I think breaking
into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary
insanity.




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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 01-23-2000 06:58 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

David-

I can feel the wanting and the
longing to join with one you love.
It will come.  
Smile ...  
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dark Angel
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2 posted 01-23-2000 07:55 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

FK, WOW I too can feel the wanting and the longing here, I can relate. Just don't let go!!   Beautiful poem FK!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Munda
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3 posted 01-23-2000 08:24 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

A beautiful poem. I enjoyed this a lot.
Marilyn
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4 posted 01-23-2000 08:31 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

David...Life is a balance and it is choices. Time will tell which direction your feet move. My hope for you is that you make the decision before circumstances make it for you. My luck and love to you my friend.  
PhaerieChild
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5 posted 01-23-2000 09:57 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Very beautifully expressed my friend. I hope you find your way to her arms soon.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


First__Knight
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6 posted 01-23-2000 10:22 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you Marge, Dark Angel , Munda.

Yes Marilyn I know where I want to be....and getting there is the hard part.  My job, my family ( What I have...which is not much), my finacial well being.  They keep me here for now.  Securing that and I will soon be there    She knows I am coming......How can I not?  Thank you so much

Thank you too Wildchild

 
I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because
people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking
into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary
insanity.


Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 01-23-2000 10:56 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

First,
Enjoyed the read.
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 01-23-2000 11:07 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh Darling...this is lovely. I know there are things that need to be worked out and I am patient...Now get here!!!...lol
Seriously, thank you for this and for saying "Know that you are the most
important thing in my life"
I love you,
Ruth


 At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato
Martie
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9 posted 01-23-2000 11:15 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

One footstep at a time makes you wise and strong--Feelings are so strong in this FK and beautiful.
Denise
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10 posted 01-23-2000 03:15 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is romantic and beautiful!!  

Denise
Echo Rhayne
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11 posted 01-23-2000 06:03 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Oh so beautiful and touching...Wanna give my boyfriend a few pointers LoL.  Quite an excellent poem, for quite an excellent person!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


First__Knight
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12 posted 01-23-2000 10:12 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you Sy and Denise
Martie....Yes on in front of the other.

Echo...I get all my pointers from Ruth.  

Ruth--Even though this is more of random thoughts spread upon this page....They are ever so real.  And I thank you so for your never ending understanding and waiting

 
I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because
people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking
into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary
insanity.


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