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What good is Love?

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spiked
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0 posted 01-23-2000 02:47 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for spiked

What good is love
That feels so strong
If all your told
Is that itís wrong

What good is love
Deep in your soul
When that love
Cannot be told

What good is love
Kept in a cage
It drives you nuts
It causes rage

What good is love
So warm and so true
When what you need
Is kept from you

I do not know the answer to
These questions that Iím asking you
I only know a love so true
Should not be locked away

I ask that you
Assist me to
Find a way
To see this through

It hurts me so
To know your mine
Yet that I cannot
Have you

Iím living now on borrowed time
The time that you will give me
And if this feeling hurts you
I hope that you forgive me

I want only to love you
The best that I can
No hidden moments
Just Love



 Richard Rendall
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devina
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1 posted 01-23-2000 05:32 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Just have faith and everything will fall into place!! Good luck to you dear!

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Bad Boy
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2 posted 01-23-2000 05:45 AM       View Profile for Bad Boy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bad Boy

Very well written.
All this talk of love has left me wanting a smoke    

take your time and she`ll come around, and if not then mabey she`s not the right one?
some time`s we have to do alot of fishing before we catch that perfect fish.
good luck


  



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freeverse
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3 posted 01-23-2000 06:42 AM       View Profile for freeverse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freeverse

good work and good luck.  
spiked
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4 posted 01-23-2000 11:29 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thank you all for the acknowledgement.
was a time time but got through it fine and she did finally come around.
Denise
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5 posted 01-23-2000 04:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful poem, and I'm glad it all worked out in the end!

Denise
 
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