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And for that I Thank You
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And for that I Thank You |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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I share with you < !signature-->My thoughts and my fears You understand My hurt and my tears And for that I thank you You are the crutch By my side You bring me out From there which I hide And for that I thank you I see in your eyes Your compassion The gentle caressing Of my heart without ration And for that I thank you I often feel closer Than this friendship we share We are bonded together You have always been there And for that I thank you Give thought to my meanings It’s more than you see I can see your true feelings How you care for me And for that I thank you So hold tightly Embrace me I give credit where due You’re my friend, my dream lover And for that I thank you. Richard Rendall [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 01-23-2000).] |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
You`ve done a great job at wording this  I can relate to this one in so many way`s. Thank you for sharing. Joel |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you Joel Appreciate your kind words I can only hope that she understands what I mean as well [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 01-23-2000).] |
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freeverse Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 14 |
Good work spiked.I'm sure she understands. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very well put |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
spiked, After reading this, I could only hope my "friend" feels this way about me. It reminds me of what I'm going through right now. Good luck! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Spiked- And for this 'I Thank You'. It is very expressive. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A beautiful, heartfelt, Thank You! Well done, Richard! Denise |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you freeverse, hoot, Marge and Denise Enjoy so much writing and posting in here. Glad I have so many to share it with. Also enjoy the access to so many beautiful poems. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
She will surely understand...this poem is lovely and touching in its sentiment. Well done.  Claire |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
very beautiful very well written |
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