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And for that I Thank You

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spiked
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0 posted 01-23-2000 02:33 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for spiked

I share with you
My thoughts and my fears
You understand
My hurt and my tears
And for that I thank you

You are the crutch
By my side
You bring me out
From there which I hide
And for that I thank you

I see in your eyes
Your compassion
The gentle caressing
Of my heart without ration
And for that I thank you

I often feel closer
Than this friendship we share
We are bonded together
You have always been there
And for that I thank you

Give thought to my meanings
It’s more than you see
I can see your true feelings
How you care for me
And for that I thank you

So hold tightly
Embrace me
I give credit where due
You’re my friend, my dream lover
And for that I thank you.



 Richard Rendall

[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 01-23-2000).]
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SnglDad
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1 posted 01-23-2000 02:37 AM       View Profile for SnglDad   Email SnglDad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SnglDad

You`ve done a great job at wording this
I can relate to this one in so many way`s.
Thank you for sharing.

                                   Joel
spiked
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2 posted 01-23-2000 02:50 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thank you Joel
Appreciate your kind words
I can only hope that she understands what I mean as well


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freeverse
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Good work spiked.I'm sure she understands.
hoot_owl_rn
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Very well put  
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spiked,
After reading this, I could only hope my "friend" feels this way about me.  It reminds me of what I'm going through right now.  Good luck!
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6 posted 01-23-2000 01:34 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Spiked-

And for this 'I Thank You'.
It is very expressive.
~*Marge*~



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7 posted 01-23-2000 04:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A beautiful, heartfelt, Thank You! Well done, Richard!

Denise
spiked
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8 posted 01-24-2000 10:00 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thank you freeverse, hoot, Marge and Denise
Enjoy so much writing and posting in here.
Glad I have so many to share it with.
Also enjoy the access to so many beautiful poems.
Meadowmuse
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She will surely understand...this poem is lovely and touching in its sentiment. Well done.  

Dear LadyClaire

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very beautiful very well written  
 
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