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SEA
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0 posted 01-22-2000 09:30 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA

Someday my mind
will forget your face
Oneday my heart
won't miss your embrace

I'll just go on
and forget what you meant to me
not even my soul
will hold one memory

You were never here
never inside my heart
-what a fool will believe-
to not fall apart.
-SEA-
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1 posted 01-22-2000 09:36 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful and sad. Very well done, SEA!

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2 posted 01-22-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Denise, Thank you very much!   -SEA
simplyYRREHS
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3 posted 01-22-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

...and what a fool I have been many times!  I really liked this writing, SEA, it feels very familiar.

Sherry

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau


Paul Hoekman
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4 posted 01-22-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Very well put.
Way to move on.
Just by writing this
I feel you have let go
even more.
freeverse
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5 posted 01-22-2000 11:54 PM       View Profile for freeverse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freeverse

beautiful poem SEA .. but it's really hard to let go.
Corinne
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6 posted 01-23-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Lovely portrait, and I most definitely can relate to this, SEA!

Corinne
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7 posted 01-23-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Sea,
I think we share the same boat right now.  Just take it one day at a time.
One Who Understands
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8 posted 01-23-2000 01:37 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

This is a great poem

I know you will get through these feelings.
Because you express them so well.
First__Knight
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9 posted 01-23-2000 01:46 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

This flows so well.  Bitter feelings involved and understand I have.  First I have seen of your work and I will look for more  

 Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe

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Very nicely written  
 
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