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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2000-01-22 09:30 PM

Someday my mind
will forget your face
Oneday my heart
won't miss your embrace

I'll just go on
and forget what you meant to me
not even my soul
will hold one memory

You were never here
never inside my heart
-what a fool will believe-
to not fall apart.
-SEA-

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-01-22 09:36 PM

Beautiful and sad. Very well done, SEA!

Denise

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2000-01-22 09:40 PM

Denise, Thank you very much!

-SEA

simplyYRREHS
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 162

3 posted 2000-01-22 11:39 PM

...and what a fool I have been many times! I really liked this writing, SEA, it feels very familiar.

Sherry

"Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

4 posted 2000-01-22 11:45 PM

Very well put.
Way to move on.
Just by writing this
I feel you have let go
even more.

freeverse
Junior Member

since 2000-01-22

Posts 14

5 posted 2000-01-22 11:54 PM

beautiful poem SEA .. but it's really hard to let go.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

6 posted 2000-01-23 01:28 AM

Lovely portrait, and I most definitely can relate to this, SEA!

Corinne

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

7 posted 2000-01-23 01:31 AM

Sea,
I think we share the same boat right now. Just take it one day at a time.

One Who Understands
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 251
Cedar Rapids, Iowa

8 posted 2000-01-23 01:37 AM

This is a great poem

I know you will get through these feelings.
Because you express them so well.

First__Knight
Senior Member

since 1999-11-08

Posts 678

9 posted 2000-01-23 01:46 AM

This flows so well. Bitter feelings involved and understand I have. First I have seen of your work and I will look for more

Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

10 posted 2000-01-23 11:12 AM

Very nicely written

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