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Flown To Eternity

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


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Moonlight softly shimmers
Upon a distant sky
The rose of youth does glimmer
Within her ageless eyes.

Innocence an empty dream
Cold as silver breath
But hidden life does gleam
Shining from the grasp of death.

Her soul once laid deflowered
Hope nearly swept away
But from a cloak of endless hours
She has come to find her way.

Within a tragic midnight
A spirit of the past has rose
A heart filled with ethereal light
Now present to destroy her woes.

Clothed in robes of purest white
A phantom emersed in love
Magnificent is this show of might
From an eternity above.

Upon painted meadows she exists
Lost in the glory of forever
Rewarded with angelic gifts
Brought upon a silken feather.




 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-22-2000 08:39 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Krista! As usual!  

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2 posted 01-22-2000 08:43 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Alwye ...
WOWIE !
This is extremely lovely.
Worth another read.
~*Marge*~


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Krista...this poem emits such hope...simply beautiful  
Dusk Treader
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4 posted 01-22-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Wonderful writing, Krista.  It's always a pleasure to read and enjoy your incredible works  

 In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons


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5 posted 01-23-2000 11:54 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

I'm boosting this one up so others can see your beautiful work  

 In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons


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6 posted 01-24-2000 01:40 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

Very beautiful
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This is wonderful Krista , As all your poems are   Enjoyed it much
 
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