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0 posted 01-22-2000 06:32 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


Hands held together
easy and free
until one day
you took yours from me

When our hands
came apart
that was when
you broke my heart

Now my hand is empty
and my life is too
my hand misses your hand
and my heart misses you.
-SEA-


*This was wrote a long time ago,for my best friend.*
© Copyright 2000 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-22-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is very lovely SEA!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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2 posted 01-22-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for Anne   Email Anne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Anne

One hand ripped from the grasp of another--what a fitting and poignant depiction of loss!  The simplicity and brevity of your lines work very well for this poem, implying more than they could ever say on the surface.  Very moving!
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Thanks Dark Angel..... I miss my friend every day. -SEA
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4 posted 01-22-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so sad  

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Enjoyed the poem SEA, sorry about the friend,
but your poem shows a lot can be said with few words if they are the right ones.
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Lovely  
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BEAUTIFUL!!
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Such tender expression!  Lovely writing.
Sherry

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beautiful writings..I like reading your poetry a lot.
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Denise,Mike,Hoot,Paul,Sherry,and freeverse......Thank you all so much for your kind praise!   -SEA
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this is beautiful, unfortunately it is sad that things ended that way.
 
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