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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-01-22 06:20 PM


Fluttered replies
Fluttering by
Flitting on Fluttering wing
Feathered with Floating images
Flattering ethereal things

Fusing the Fatidic thoughts
Fettered in my mind
Fervently Festooning
Fanciful Flowers
Filigreed with Finesse
Flummoxed with Flexuous paths

Favonian wind
Fetching me away
I am not Fey
within the Feckless Face
of a mere Fleck upon Faces of Fame
Feminine Feezing
Feeling that which
is not Fictive, Felonious or Feigned
within the Figment of my mind.

Filching just one Felicific moment
before the Finale
of my Foibles
drowns me in Fast Fluvial currents

Flinching From
the Finis




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Martie
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1 posted 2000-01-22 06:23 PM


Fabulous and fetching this facination with the F.
Mike
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2 posted 2000-01-22 06:25 PM


Phabulous...  er...
Dark Angel
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3 posted 2000-01-22 06:32 PM


This is Fantastic!! Marge.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Anne
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4 posted 2000-01-22 07:01 PM


Another one of THOSE days, huh?  
Very enjoyable read!

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5 posted 2000-01-22 07:02 PM


Real F-ing clever, Marge!  
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6 posted 2000-01-22 07:11 PM


A fully fanciful and fulgent fanfare!  

Claire

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7 posted 2000-01-22 07:40 PM


Martie-
Marge *feigns* surprise
at poet's fancy accolades.

Mike-
Phooey !  Warn't nuthing!
And if you can fathom that
I've got a few flutes to play !

DarkAngel-
Fading fast the F-ing phase.

Anne-
Fleeting flights of fancy for real !

Balladeer-
Fact is I'm feeling fit !
Fit as a fiddle
and fifty times friskier
with fresh frivolity !

MeadowMuse-
And it wasn't a shining day until
the fanciful F's took over !


What else but a  
~Marge~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2000-01-22 08:19 PM


Fully a fascinating and fruitful frivolity  
The title had me worried but only for a sec!  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


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9 posted 2000-01-22 08:25 PM


Marge - Say that again...hehehehehe  
(I didn't know there were that many F words!)

Denise

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10 posted 2000-01-22 08:38 PM


Isis-
Whatever the flowing flood of thought
please be sure I am not fraught with
too many fretful frays ...
but this was just one of those 'F-ing' days.

I sometimes just take a thought
and run with it ... keeps me busy
and out of trouble.

Denise-
Fe Fi Foe Fum ...
there are more
where these came from.
Fiddle dee dee ...
Can't seem to get the 'F' out of me.
Someone help me turn off this faucet!

~Marge~



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Pepper
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11 posted 2000-01-22 08:56 PM


It seems all the good f words have already been used....so I'll just say....Really freaking good Marge  
Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2000-01-22 09:05 PM


Pepper-

I'm FREAKING OUT !  
Thanks for the funny one !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2000-01-22 09:28 PM


This is full of feelings fruited from the letter f....I'll bet you had fun with it  
PhaerieChild
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14 posted 2000-01-23 10:04 AM


F-ing good!! I was real surprised but pleasantly so. Gives a whole new meaning to the f-word.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
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Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2000-01-23 10:38 AM


Hoot-
Fun?  That's an F-letter word.
Falling from Fruit of Fig ..
thought I'd Finally gotten over it
but here I Find at least Forty
more Facts to burden my mind.
I tell you it was Fantastic FUN !

WildChild,
You make me smile.
'F-ing good' sends me
Futilely Floundering for more.
Okay Folks ...
don't get me Fueled up For more.
!  

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 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com         



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 01-23-2000).]

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2000-01-23 10:45 AM


Marge,
Your all F'ed up. Very clever really enjoyed the read. *L* Sy

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17 posted 2000-01-23 01:46 PM


Marge,
I have never read so many "F" word`s in one place before.
I was thinking you were a Bad girl when I read the title.
Very nice wording and a very misleading Title.
Good Job Marge.




 The Devil Made Me Do It.


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