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In the Moonlight, Shadows Dancing... (Hoot's challenge)

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Mike
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0 posted 01-22-2000 05:54 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike


In the moonlight, shadows dancing,
I gaze upon primrose entrancing,
A single bloom on leafless stem,
Satin beauty without blem.
Glow of Luna's shimmering light,
Bathes velvet petals in the night,
Twelve dozen roses in golden urn,
For one primrose would surely spurn.
For in moon's light, as shadows dance,
A yellow bloom, my heart entrance.
© Copyright 2000 Mike - All Rights Reserved
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Oh, so lovely Mike.  You are a flower child.
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2 posted 01-22-2000 06:11 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Magical and beautiful!-SEA  
Munda
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3 posted 01-22-2000 07:22 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Love what you do with words Mike.   Another beauty. (btw....no more sonnets ?)
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Oooh, Mike, this one's a keeper!

Perfection in a poem!


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5 posted 01-22-2000 07:46 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mike-

This is so lovely.  Like having
the florist delivering your thoughts.

Somebody call the florist !
MARTIE ... that's YOU.


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Your words have made a beautiful bouquet! Very lovely, Mike!  

Denise
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A dazling boquet of words. Nicely done Mike...challange well met, thank you  
Mike
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Thank you all for the gracious comments.
Glad I passed hoot_owl_rn      *smile*
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Reading this piece brings to life the shimmering moonlight and dancing shadows upon your cherished primrose. Beautifully crafted, Mike.

Claire
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Appreciate the reply Claire...
May you find a primose that is dancing in the shadows of the moonlight.
Elizabeth Santos
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So beautiful, a rose bathed in moonlight
Enchanting verse
Liz
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Very loving poetry....simply beautiful.  

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau


 
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