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Just a little bliss

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Seymour Tabin
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       Just a little bliss

You are a gentle women, a friend
And will be this, until the end.
You came to me not passing through,
But stayed and shaped my life anew.

Your valhalla to this Vikings prayer,
A reason for a heros dare.
An anchor and a safe atoll,
And my spirits port of call.

A gentle wind my ship to steer,
A song unto my starving ear.
Oasis to my searching goal,
A sip of water to my soul.

El dorado is what you are,
The north star a journeys far.
A touch of color in the light,
A blanket for the chill of night.

I cannot say what you are,
Nor can I explain a star?
You opened up your soul its door.
And I flew in forever more.

So do not fret the harm of this,
It's just a little touch of bliss.
© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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This is beautiful, Seymour.  
Denise
Martie
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Your poem Sy, is just a little touch of bliss.
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3 posted 01-22-2000 05:31 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour-

Should I have envisioned this?
Such a lovely ~Touch Of Bliss~.
Falling from your fingertips once more,
beauteous phrases by the score.

~Marge~


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Anne
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Lovely metaphors!  Well spoken!
devina
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Very lovely, you romantic heart!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Meadowmuse
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If one could befriend
this sweetened bliss that you've penned
'twould be, indeed, spontaneity,
befitting the banks of Monet
or the mindful regard
of The Wait's Béraud
in certain, 'twould be heartful to me.

Lovely work, this poem of bliss!


tori
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Sey I can only say that I wished someone wrote this for me.. Phenomenal peice!
Isis
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Sey beautiful, aah to be adored so would make my day!!  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

Seymour Tabin
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Denise,
Thank you for the beautiful. *L*
Martie,
Thank you.*L*
Marge,
Lovely response, thank you. *L*
Anne,
Thank you for the metaphor well spoken.
Devina,
Yes it is romantic.
Meadow,
Lovely comment, thank you.
Tori,
Thank you for the phenomenal.
Isis,
Thank you.
hoot_owl_rn
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*sighs* nicely written Sy
Grandma Jo
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romantic and lovely!
Balladeer
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Excellent thoughts well expressed, Sy.
Paul Hoekman
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Wonderful Rythm,
beautiful words,
although one of them
I never have heard.

Earthman
Elizabeth Santos
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14 posted 01-23-2000 07:48 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
Bliss is something we rarely experience in our lives, so if you have a touch of bliss, you are truly blessed
This is a very beautiful poem from the heart
Love ya
Liz
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It is so nice when your muse returns, Sy.  And of course, the romance rings through.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Nicole
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What is this?...true bliss?  Oh, I know what that is!  I know the rapture of true bliss every time I read one of your beautiful poems!  

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 01-23-2000 11:28 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Hoot,
Thank you sweet. *L* Sy
Grandma Jo,
Thank you.
Balladeer,
Your words to me a little bliss.
Paul,
Thank you.
Elizabeth,
You deserve a little bliss. Love Sy
Sunshine,
Love your comments. *L* Sy
 
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