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tori
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


0 posted 01-22-2000 01:32 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

I woke up this morning with a new feel in my heart,
no hurt, no ache, not torn apart
Alive and awakened with a bright kind of a spark
Memories are good ones not sad on my mind,
I'm growing, as I'm learning that all heals in time
How lucky I am to have been in this sleep
And the learning, I did, while sleeping away.
Wow.. What can happen when the night turns to day
I walked in a dream and loved in a dream,
held on to nothing, as something it seemed
But the bright sun light shines on me today,
it showed me that nothing ever stood in my way
Just glad that I'm up now ...this day feels so good,
on top of the world here.. like I never thought I could
How good this day, that I've awaken too,
I am awake,... and nothing reminds me of you
tori 1999


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If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
vlh.

© Copyright 2000 Victoria Hosier/tori - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 01-22-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful, Tori! That's great!

Denise
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2 posted 01-22-2000 01:58 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

tori....this is great! I've been there too.
What a beautiful day indeed!   -SEA
SnglDad
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3 posted 01-22-2000 02:04 PM       View Profile for SnglDad   Email SnglDad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SnglDad

I think you have done a nice job here
but I think I like the other 2 just a
little more.
Good Job
                                    Joel
tori
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4 posted 01-22-2000 07:35 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thank's Guy's  
Anne
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5 posted 01-22-2000 07:55 PM       View Profile for Anne   Email Anne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Anne

That last line is almost haunting!  Great poem!
tori
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6 posted 01-22-2000 08:12 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Glad you liked it Anne. thanks...
hoot_owl_rn
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Wonderful title and wonderful poem to match  

 At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato
tori
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8 posted 01-22-2000 10:21 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thanks Hoot gald you liked!
WhtDove
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Tori, it's so good to see you cheery!!  This poem made me bubble with joy!  

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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