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The dreamers pallete

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Kevin
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0 posted 01-22-2000 01:22 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

Upon the ever gentle night,
a dreamer lies with eyes closed tight,
and paints a canvas of delight,
with hues inside their mind.

Through memories, their brush they grace,
to paint themselves a better place.
The days gone by that they embraced,
but had to leave behind.

And still some colors had to fade,
the price of time, so costly paid.
Decisions that nobody made
but knew the consequence.

And in the artists slow awake,
a second for themselves they take
to think of colors that they'll make
in beauty of days hence.


[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 01-22-2000).]
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Munda
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1 posted 01-22-2000 01:36 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

This is a great poem, I love it !  
Denise
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2 posted 01-22-2000 01:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful poem, Kevin! I like how it ended with a look toward the future!  

Denise
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3 posted 01-22-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for ~ViXeN~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~ViXeN~

wow kev this is really beautiful! i love this
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 01-22-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kevin-

You have splattered me with paint
from your dreamers palette.

I am in no hurry to wash it off.
Wonderful images, my friend.

Artistry from you in so many colors ...
your palette is full.
Love ~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Parker
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5 posted 01-22-2000 07:43 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Kevin, this is another of your great style, but do I see a swing towards a more positive ending trend. Either way I love your poems.

Parker
Anne
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6 posted 01-22-2000 07:47 PM       View Profile for Anne   Email Anne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Anne

Breathlessly beautiful!  I loved this one!
Kevin
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7 posted 01-22-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

thanks munda may you paint a masterpiece tonight

d, the futures all i have

vix, such colors come from you alone!

wear em with pride marge =)

haley, positive but brief

anne breath its good for you =)
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 01-23-2000 11:57 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

A colorful array of words  
JOY 14
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9 posted 01-23-2000 12:18 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

Kevin,
You paint a lovely picture.

 JOY

Corinne
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10 posted 01-23-2000 12:24 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Kevin,

you are growing into quite the poet!

Keep writing!


Corinne
Kevin
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11 posted 01-23-2000 04:02 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

hoot and joy, the metaphors continue! what have i done  lol!

corinne, so close yet so far away =)
Master
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12 posted 01-23-2000 07:20 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I find your poetry very similar to my own. You have a great style and a fantastic imagination. Keep the ink flowing, Master
Martie
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13 posted 01-23-2000 07:46 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Kevin, this is very well done.  Your poetry is an inspiration.

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