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vandana
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0 posted 01-22-2000 12:20 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

Don't want to know
How and why we went wrong this way,
This hurts me so bad,
The heart dies,
And question myself why,
It's fair to fel so hurt
When you had to leave me

And left me alone to get hurt
Inside mt boby,
I feel weak,
Don't have answers to say to you,
But I feel It was my mistake
That I let you go,

It feels so hurt,
So hurt inside,
Don't want to feel how,
I can explain any words
To feel how I am,
Waiting to see
how days will go by,

It hurts so much ,
to see you go,
And never say where and
when you will return
in my arms again
© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 01-22-2000 12:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad, Vandana  

Denise
Munda
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2 posted 01-22-2000 01:43 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

So sad indeed  

[This message has been edited by Munda (edited 01-22-2000).]
Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 01-22-2000 01:43 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Vandana, yes very sad.  *hugs*  Sad, but a great poem =)

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


G. A. Webb
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4 posted 01-22-2000 01:53 PM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for G. A. Webb

I'm sorry you feel this way, but I know exactly where you are coming from. You might want to consider posting this one on Dark Passions. Well done.
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 01-22-2000 06:16 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

vandana,
Beautiful again
Liz
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6 posted 01-22-2000 06:19 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

So sad and beautiful.
Anne
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7 posted 01-22-2000 07:08 PM       View Profile for Anne   Email Anne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Anne

"The heart dies..."
I loved this one, so sad...
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 01-22-2000 08:34 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

vandana,
A strong and emotional poem, well done.
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 01-22-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Vandana-
Another nice one for sure.
And, hon ... when you least expect it
the heart stops hurting.
Love ~Marge~


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hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 01-22-2000 09:46 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

So very sad  
Balladeer
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Excellent strong emotions on display here, Vandana
 
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