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The Horizon

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G. A. Webb
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0 posted 01-22-2000 11:28 AM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for G. A. Webb

THE HORIZON

The sea is yours the sky is mine
Hand in hand we'll walk the line
That brings the sunset and the dawn
My love for you will linger on

I am the sun and you are the tides
A swift moving current is what our love rides
The one thing between us is the green land
Filled with beautiful flowers and beaches of sand

You are the ocean and I am the moon
Together we sing a sweet lovers tune
That draws us two closer with each passing day
And weaves us together in every which way

You throw dolphins and whales that splash my cool air
Gazing down upon you I can't help but to stare
At your soft flowing waves that shimmer with light
Waves that I always want to have in my sight

I give you my love in the warm pouring rain
You respond with a rainbow that serves to sustain
The bond that's so powerful it has our hearts pinned
Our love is forever I whisper with wind

Together forever is what we will be
With me as the sky and you as the sea
Upon the horizon is where we will pet
And share in our love to creat the sunset

G.A. Webb


[This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 01-23-2000).]
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Denise
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1 posted 01-22-2000 12:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful images! Very lovely!

Denise
Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 01-22-2000 01:45 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Such a beautiful poem...flowed very nicely too which makes for am good read!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


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3 posted 01-22-2000 02:54 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

The images your words conjured in my mind and in my heart touched me. How beautiful! -SEA
G. A. Webb
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4 posted 01-22-2000 04:37 PM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for G. A. Webb

Thank you all for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it.  )
Seymour Tabin
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G.A.
Good one enjoyed the read. Nice flow, good words, good poem.
Corinne
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6 posted 01-22-2000 07:27 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Lovely imagery used here!

And a sweet pouring out of love.


Corinne
Anne
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7 posted 01-22-2000 07:30 PM       View Profile for Anne   Email Anne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Anne

"A bird and a fish may fall in love, but where will they live?"

Evidently here!

(Great poem!  Wonderful images!)
Isis
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Such beautiful imagery my friend. Ocean themes are always a winner with me !  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

tulip
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This is beautiful...hmm...I could stay here for a while!  
 
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