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Trapped in a circle
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Trapped in a circle |
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Denbee New Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 6Lodi, New Joisee |
One day in routine mode, just doing my thing One day we met and everything changed One day we're together and nothing can go wrong One day we are not and nothings the same One day I'm so happy, on top of the world One day so confused, don't know what to do One day my mind keeps playing over & over again One day my mind just cannot forget One day I want never to end One day when we kissed & held you ever so close One day history keeps repeating itself One day I keep dredding for far too long One day we're out having a wonderful time One day we're out and I feel so alone One day I'm taking a reality check One day has just been some kind of dream One day I wonder will ever come back again One day I keep telling myself One day........... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sometimes it does seem to go round and round...great poem! Denise |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Feels like you're trapped on a merry-go-round and can't get off, doesn't it? I don't believe I have welcomed you to Passions yet, so welcome to the fam.! Hope to read more soon! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Denbee New Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 6Lodi, New Joisee |
Thanx for responding, feels good to share my thoughts, nice to know somebody's listening. |
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