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Trapped in a circle

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Denbee
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0 posted 01-22-2000 11:26 AM       View Profile for Denbee   Email Denbee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denbee


One day in routine mode, just doing my thing
One day we met and everything changed

One day we're together and nothing can go wrong
One day we are not and nothings the same

One day I'm so happy, on top of the world
One day so confused, don't know what to do

One day my mind keeps playing over & over again
One day my mind just cannot forget

One day I want never to end
One day when we kissed & held you ever so close

One day history keeps repeating itself
One day I keep dredding for far too long

One day we're out having a wonderful time
One day we're out and I feel so alone

One day I'm taking a reality check
One day has just been some kind of dream

One day I wonder will ever come back again
One day I keep telling myself

One day...........


 
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Denise
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1 posted 01-22-2000 12:24 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sometimes it does seem to go round and round...great poem!

Denise
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2 posted 01-22-2000 01:41 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Feels like you're trapped on a merry-go-round and can't get off, doesn't it?  I don't believe I have welcomed you to Passions yet, so welcome to the fam.!  Hope to read more soon!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


Denbee
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Thanx for responding, feels good to share my thoughts, nice to know somebody's listening.

 
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