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freeverse
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0 posted 01-22-2000 10:23 AM       View Profile for freeverse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freeverse

You said you were in love with me.
And that our love was meant to be.
You stood by my side when I needed you.
I thought for sure your love was true.
What had gone wrong exactly ?
One moment you were confessing your love to me,
and the next you turned cold suddenly.
Then you said we should see other people.
Have you fallen for another girl ?
I need to know how you really feel.
I need to know if our love was real.
But you just left without saying goodbye.
you broke someone's heart and it was mine.
Now I have to pick up the pieces by myself.
While you are out having fun with someone else.
How could you do this to me ?
How could you throw away what we had so easily ?
How could you ..

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Nicole
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1 posted 01-22-2000 11:23 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Very poignant and sad, and about feelings that many people can relate to.  This has all happened to us at one time or another!

  
Welcome to Passions!!  I look forward to seeing more from you.

[This message has been edited by Satiate (edited 01-22-2000).]
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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2 posted 01-22-2000 11:33 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Welcome to passions  

 At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato
Poet deVine
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3 posted 01-22-2000 11:42 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Very sad poem here, but I sure can relate.  
Denise
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4 posted 01-22-2000 12:18 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Freeverse! Wonderful poem! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 01-22-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Welcome to passions, sad poem and I too can relate!  I hope to read some more soon!


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


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6 posted 01-22-2000 03:18 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

I have one for you........

I cry each night
when I go to bed
just because good-bye
was never said

You just stoped calling
without a single word
If you said good-bye
it was never heard

I guess you silence
was your way of good-bye
it's too bad you didn't care enough
to even try.-SEA

I understand too well how you felt in this piece. Great writting!-SEA
freeverse
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since 01-22-2000
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7 posted 01-22-2000 11:50 PM       View Profile for freeverse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freeverse

Dsnyder - thanks for that special greeting card.

SEA - that's a good but sad poem you have there.I like the rhyme.

And thanks to everyone for your warm welcome..
Paul Hoekman
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since 12-28-1999
Posts 385
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8 posted 01-22-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

A person who can bare there soul
like this surely God has another soul
he won't let you miss.
Bad Boy
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since 01-23-2000
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9 posted 01-23-2000 05:27 AM       View Profile for Bad Boy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bad Boy

Even I wouldn`t stoop that low.  
Your better off without him.
His loss.
Good Luck




[This message has been edited by Bad Boy (edited 01-23-2000).]
 
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