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freeverse
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since 2000-01-22
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0 posted 2000-01-22 10:23 AM


You said you were in love with me.
And that our love was meant to be.
You stood by my side when I needed you.
I thought for sure your love was true.
What had gone wrong exactly ?
One moment you were confessing your love to me,
and the next you turned cold suddenly.
Then you said we should see other people.
Have you fallen for another girl ?
I need to know how you really feel.
I need to know if our love was real.
But you just left without saying goodbye.
you broke someone's heart and it was mine.
Now I have to pick up the pieces by myself.
While you are out having fun with someone else.
How could you do this to me ?
How could you throw away what we had so easily ?
How could you ..


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Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
1 posted 2000-01-22 11:23 AM


Very poignant and sad, and about feelings that many people can relate to.  This has all happened to us at one time or another!

  
Welcome to Passions!!  I look forward to seeing more from you.

[This message has been edited by Satiate (edited 01-22-2000).]

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-01-22 11:33 AM


Welcome to passions  

 At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato

Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-01-22 11:42 AM


Welcome to the family! Very sad poem here, but I sure can relate.  
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-01-22 12:18 PM


Welcome to Passions, Freeverse! Wonderful poem! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
5 posted 2000-01-22 01:39 PM


Welcome to passions, sad poem and I too can relate!  I hope to read some more soon!


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~



SEA
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with you
6 posted 2000-01-22 03:18 PM


I have one for you........

I cry each night
when I go to bed
just because good-bye
was never said

You just stoped calling
without a single word
If you said good-bye
it was never heard

I guess you silence
was your way of good-bye
it's too bad you didn't care enough
to even try.-SEA

I understand too well how you felt in this piece. Great writting!-SEA

freeverse
Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 14

7 posted 2000-01-22 11:50 PM


Dsnyder - thanks for that special greeting card.

SEA - that's a good but sad poem you have there.I like the rhyme.

And thanks to everyone for your warm welcome..

Paul Hoekman
Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
8 posted 2000-01-22 11:55 PM


A person who can bare there soul
like this surely God has another soul
he won't let you miss.

Bad Boy
Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 78

9 posted 2000-01-23 05:27 AM


Even I wouldn`t stoop that low.  
Your better off without him.
His loss.
Good Luck




[This message has been edited by Bad Boy (edited 01-23-2000).]

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