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Dark Angel
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0 posted 01-22-2000 08:10 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Enigma


Breathe in
Breathe out
Heart beats
Like a drum
One, two, three,
One, two, three
Feel the hum?
The time has come

Voices whispering
Right to left,
Left to right
Echoing
Through
The night

Fire's flame
Reaching
High, so
Very high
Scraping
The charcoal
Sky

Searching!
Above and below
Below and above
'Til you find
The lust
For battle
For power
For Love


Dark Angel



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Moonshine
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1 posted 01-22-2000 08:20 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Wow - DA I really like this. It feels almost supernatural. Well done.
Munda
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2 posted 01-22-2000 08:23 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

*G* DA, this poem is even better than the last one I just read from you. Love it !
hoot_owl_rn
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This one has a lot of power behind it my friend...almost reads like a chant  
Denise
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Very good, Dark Angel! I enjoyed this!  
WhtDove
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WOOHOO!!  You go girl! Great read DA!!
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6 posted 01-22-2000 09:00 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Dark Angel.....Wow! You gave me tingles! Very cool.- SEA  
Dark Angel
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Moonshine, thanks hon  
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WOW Munda thanks so very much!!  
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Ruth, thanks so much my friend  
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Thanks Denise I appreciate that!  
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Rebecca, so glad you enjoyed it Angel Girl!  
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SEA, so glad to have given you the tingles ;-)
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 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Severn
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8 posted 01-23-2000 02:53 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

WOW!
The passion in this...I like it!

Searching!
Above and below
Below and above
'Til you find
The lust
For battle
For power
For Love

Great stuff A of L

K



 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
Dark Angel
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9 posted 01-23-2000 02:32 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you Sweet Butterfly, I'm glad you liked it  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


 
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