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His Choosing

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tulip
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0 posted 01-22-2000 01:44 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip


One man,
two souls,
tossing,
and searching,
for love.

One soul
is physical,
the other
emotional.

The emotional
soul yearns
for more.
And recieves
little glimpses
into his heart.

The physical soul
recieves more.
But he wants both.

Each wait
for him to choose.

And yet he doesn't.

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1 posted 01-22-2000 01:57 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

It seems so sad. The choice is his, yet he won't make it. Or he can't. Beautiful.-SEA
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2 posted 01-22-2000 03:33 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

So familier in more than just this same situation...well put
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3 posted 01-22-2000 04:49 AM       View Profile for WolfsMate   Email WolfsMate   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WolfsMate

I understand this too well. Nicely done.
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4 posted 01-22-2000 05:55 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Why can't everybody just meet the ONE person that fulfills the emotional, physical, & intellectual needs?  It's not fair, is it?
simplyYRREHS
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Not fair at all, Tulip.  "Emotional vs. Physical" has always seemed to have presented quite the battle.  It takes a taste of both from opposite sides, the "give and take" thing, but it does seem that one side is always a little more tolerant to the taking than the giving.  Sigh.  You have provided quite the thought provoking read.

Sherry

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau


Anne
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6 posted 01-22-2000 07:16 PM       View Profile for Anne   Email Anne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Anne

So effectively done!  I know what you mean!
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7 posted 01-23-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Simply,
I'd love to be on the other side of the recieving!!!  But I do get something out of it, otherwise I would be long gone!
Anne,
Thanks...
 
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