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His Choosing
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His Choosing |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
One man, two souls, tossing, and searching, for love. One soul is physical, the other emotional. The emotional soul yearns for more. And recieves little glimpses into his heart. The physical soul recieves more. But he wants both. Each wait for him to choose. And yet he doesn't. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
It seems so sad. The choice is his, yet he won't make it. Or he can't. Beautiful.-SEA |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
So familier in more than just this same situation...well put  |
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WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
I understand this too well. Nicely done. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Why can't everybody just meet the ONE person that fulfills the emotional, physical, & intellectual needs? It's not fair, is it? |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Not fair at all, Tulip. "Emotional vs. Physical" has always seemed to have presented quite the battle. It takes a taste of both from opposite sides, the "give and take" thing, but it does seem that one side is always a little more tolerant to the taking than the giving. Sigh. You have provided quite the thought provoking read. Sherry"Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
So effectively done! I know what you mean! |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Simply, I'd love to be on the other side of the recieving!!! But I do get something out of it, otherwise I would be long gone! Anne, Thanks... |
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