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Stargazer
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0 posted 01-21-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for Stargazer   Email Stargazer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Stargazer's Home Page   View IP for Stargazer

I held your hand
you touched my cheek
I looked in your eyes
my knees went weak

Your skin so soft
your love so sweet
you always knew to
sweep me off my feet

Every carress
is a lullaby
and when they stop
I think I'll die

So break away now
don't prolong the pain
my eyes already
swell with rain

Let daggers strike
and empty my soul
before if fills
and I lose control


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Echo Rhayne
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1 posted 01-22-2000 02:03 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Beautiful poem, and I welcome you to passions!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


~ViXeN~
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Guelph, Ont. Canada


2 posted 01-22-2000 02:20 AM       View Profile for ~ViXeN~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~ViXeN~

very beautiful poem =)
i loved it!!
shannon
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3 posted 01-22-2000 02:31 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Yes, welcome. You have tons of potential...

Mike
One Who Understands
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4 posted 01-22-2000 03:24 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

That was excellent

I like how you show with examples of why the pain should end quickly...well done
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 01-22-2000 09:25 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I really enjoyed this...welcome to passions  
Severn
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6 posted 01-26-2000 07:11 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wow - this is gently beautiful...

lovely...



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life enriches writing'
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CrazyChick
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7 posted 01-26-2000 10:55 PM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Great Work!!!
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