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Stargazer
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since 01-21-2000
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Alvordton, OH USA


0 posted 01-21-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for Stargazer   Email Stargazer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Stargazer's Home Page   View IP for Stargazer

I cannot look away
from your sky eyes
like starry nights
and sunny days
and endless ocean waves
enrapturement controls me
I'll obey you
every breath a treasure
for me to lock up and hoarde
for you are MINE
but you own me
and my heart
I cannot control myself
but to love you
and your sweet silken lips
upon my cheek
upon my jaw
upon my neck
though I cry
my tears are diamonds
for you to admire




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poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
Posts 2961
Arkansas


1 posted 01-22-2000 01:53 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

This is exquisite!  I loved some of the words you used!  Beautiful imagery....Made me glad to be in love.....aaahhh.

 ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000!
One Who Understands
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since 01-20-2000
Posts 252
Cedar Rapids, Iowa


2 posted 01-22-2000 03:42 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

"diamonds for you to admire"
What a beautiful way to express your detication and unconditional love.

Love to see more of your pieces
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


3 posted 01-22-2000 09:32 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh my, this is wonderful and has a few very ingeniuos lines...well done  
Corinne
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 5247
state of confusion


4 posted 01-22-2000 10:38 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

I love poems such as this, wanna know why?
Because they are sencere and full of open love and passion.

Love the line about tears being diamonds, too!


Corinne
Denise
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5 posted 01-22-2000 12:58 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful and romantic! Very nice!

Denise
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