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Stargazer
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since 01-21-2000
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Alvordton, OH USA


0 posted 01-21-2000 11:35 PM       View Profile for Stargazer   Email Stargazer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Stargazer's Home Page   View IP for Stargazer

Your voice
can shatter hearts
and it soothed against mine
mending the breaks
and restoring my faith in you
every word so thought out
but filled with your bold heart
and completely spur-of the moment
you feed my heart
the vicious monster that it is
and make me want to sing
you reach for me
and your voice leads the way of your hand
smoothing against my cheek
before your skin comes near
you seduce me
through a mere breath
and your touch
is only an added bonus
for I am yours
before you can place your brand upon me
and I cannot leave
though my body is free
not chained down
my mind is captivated
by the taste of your voice.




[This message has been edited by Stargazer (edited 01-21-2000).]
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simplyYRREHS
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since 01-03-2000
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1 posted 01-22-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

Welcome, stargazer!  Nice writing.  I smiled even more imagining it as "Type" in place of the "Voice" in your poem.  Interesting.  The last line would read, "...by the taste of your type". Thanks for the smiles.

Sherry
WolfsMate
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since 01-14-2000
Posts 122
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2 posted 01-22-2000 04:40 AM       View Profile for WolfsMate   Email WolfsMate   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WolfsMate

Soft and sensual. Enjoyed the read
d.schultz
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since 01-21-2000
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3 posted 01-22-2000 08:44 AM       View Profile for d.schultz   Email d.schultz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for d.schultz

Very Sensual......  I agree very nice reading  
Nan
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4 posted 01-22-2000 08:53 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

You've some very nice sentiments here, stargazer... Welcome to Passions - We look forward to reading more of your work... Check your email...
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5 posted 01-22-2000 09:08 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

StarGazer-

A very nice entrance onto the
stage of Passion's.  
A bouquet to you.

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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6 posted 01-22-2000 03:36 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Stargazer! This is beautiful!

Denise
Anne
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since 12-31-1999
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7 posted 01-22-2000 07:53 PM       View Profile for Anne   Email Anne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Anne

Loved that last line!  Well done!
Paul Hoekman
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since 12-28-1999
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8 posted 01-22-2000 08:16 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Breath Taking!
I really enjoyed
your first post.
Welcome!
Look forward to
reading many more.
 
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