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Floating along a cloud!

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 01-21-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


Every time I think of you
My heart floats along
Marshmallow clouds
It feels like springtime
The blooming flowers
Dance in the sun's kiss
As does my soul
Baking, soaking in
Your love
Which covers me
From head to toe
Completely!

The green velvet grass
Enfolds me, gently
As I stare up at
The cobalt blue sky
And there I see my heart
Floating along a cloud
And your heart beside me
Embracing me tightly
Needing me just
And loving me
Completely!

We melt slowly
Within each other
To be as one
Melting down
We become
One!
We become
The cloud


Dark Angel.



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge






[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 01-22-2000).]
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Denise
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1 posted 01-21-2000 06:08 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh so Beautiful, Dark Angel!  

Denise
Martie
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2 posted 01-21-2000 06:47 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

WHAT A WONDERFUL WAY OF LOOKING AT THE SKY.  LOVELY!
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3 posted 01-21-2000 07:18 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Dark Angel-

Felt your heart in this one for sure.
So very pretty ... changing shape
as readily as the clouds.
LOVE THE FORMATTING !

~*Marge*~


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WhtDove
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4 posted 01-21-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Beautiful view DA!! Excellent!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


Alwye
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In the space between moments


5 posted 01-21-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Magic!  How beautiful, I love this!  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

Dark Angel
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6 posted 01-22-2000 07:06 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Denise, thanks honey  
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Martie, yes a wonderful way, thank you.  
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marge, thanks so much for your lovey comment!
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Angel, thanks so much hon!  
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So gladyou liked it Alwye   thank you


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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7 posted 01-22-2000 07:09 AM       View Profile for SnglDad   Email SnglDad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SnglDad

With a piece as sweet as that you should
call your self Heavenly Angel
Thank you for sharing this
and God Bless

                       Joel
Munda
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8 posted 01-22-2000 08:08 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

I enjoyed this very much DA.  
Moonshine
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9 posted 01-22-2000 08:28 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Beautiful DA - very heartfelt and well written words. Your poetry goes from strength to strength.
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10 posted 01-22-2000 09:47 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very beautiful words DA  
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11 posted 01-22-2000 03:07 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Mushy.....Soft.......Sweet......Lovely.-SEA
Dark Angel
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12 posted 01-23-2000 01:30 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Sngldad, you're so sweet thank you.  
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Munda thanks so very much.  
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Moonshine thank you so much for your lovely comment and compliment.  
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Ruth, thanks so much hon.  
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Thanks so much SEA!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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13 posted 01-23-2000 01:43 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Oh so many dreams I have had looking into the clouds.  And today with your poem in mind....I will look endlessly for my love in the cloud....she knows who she is.  Simply beautiful Dark Angel.  

 Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe

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14 posted 01-23-2000 02:22 AM       View Profile for Altameria   Email Altameria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Altameria's Home Page   View IP for Altameria

I loved your poem, it was beautiful, much like the clouds.

          pattie
Severn
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15 posted 01-26-2000 07:26 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Huh? Blinking...missed this!

Here I am - a tad late, but here I am...and this IS worth the read indeed my friend.

Vely welly don!



K

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life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
Dark Angel
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16 posted 01-26-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Hey Sweet Butterfly, Tank You Tank You vely Vely Much,  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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