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Floating along a cloud! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Every time I think of you My heart floats along Marshmallow clouds It feels like springtime The blooming flowers Dance in the sun's kiss As does my soul Baking, soaking in Your love Which covers me From head to toe Completely! The green velvet grass Enfolds me, gently As I stare up at The cobalt blue sky And there I see my heart Floating along a cloud And your heart beside me Embracing me tightly Needing me just And loving me Completely! We melt slowly Within each other To be as one Melting down We become One! We become The cloud Dark Angel. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 01-22-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh so Beautiful, Dark Angel!  Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
WHAT A WONDERFUL WAY OF LOOKING AT THE SKY. LOVELY! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark Angel- Felt your heart in this one for sure. So very pretty ... changing shape as readily as the clouds. LOVE THE FORMATTING ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Beautiful view DA!! Excellent! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Magic! How beautiful, I love this! *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Denise, thanks honey ---------------- Martie, yes a wonderful way, thank you. --------------- marge, thanks so much for your lovey comment! --------------- Angel, thanks so much hon! --------------- So gladyou liked it Alwye thank youWhat comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
With a piece as sweet as that you should call your self Heavenly Angel Thank you for sharing this and God Bless Joel |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I enjoyed this very much DA. |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Beautiful DA - very heartfelt and well written words. Your poetry goes from strength to strength. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very beautiful words DA |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mushy.....Soft.......Sweet......Lovely.-SEA |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sngldad, you're so sweet thank you. ----------------- Munda thanks so very much. ----------------- Moonshine thank you so much for your lovely comment and compliment. ----------------- Ruth, thanks so much hon. ----------------- Thanks so much SEA! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh so many dreams I have had looking into the clouds. And today with your poem in mind....I will look endlessly for my love in the cloud....she knows who she is. Simply beautiful Dark Angel. Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe |
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Altameria Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 22Whitby, Ontario, Canada |
I loved your poem, it was beautiful, much like the clouds. pattie |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Huh? Blinking...missed this! Here I am - a tad late, but here I am...and this IS worth the read indeed my friend. Vely welly don!  K 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Sweet Butterfly, Tank You Tank You vely Vely Much, What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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