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In the moonlight, shadows dancing (Response to Hoot's challenge)

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LngJhnAg
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0 posted 01-21-2000 04:52 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for LngJhnAg

OK - lemme give this a try, too

In the moonlight, shadows dancing,
Turning smoothly in the night.
Toerag's arms furtively romancing,
His blow up date that he holds tight.

First he tries to do the Twist,
She lets out a squeaking moan.
Then he steals a sloppy kiss,
In his room there all alone.

In the moonlight, shadows dancing,
Casting reflections on the glass.
Toerag's shadow, his belly enhancing,
The stumbling profile of his a**.

Next he tries to do the waltz,
His "date" swings on his arm.
It really isn't Toerag's fault,
He was raised out on the farm.

In the moonlight, shadows dancing,
The whoosing sigh is heard too soon.
Toerag's date gives a blow glancing,
As she sails around the room.


heh heh heh - Toe, you really need to talk to Arthur Murray before you take a date home to the overpass.
© Copyright 2000 Michael Waterman - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 01-21-2000 04:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Hillarious, Mike. Geesh, I was expecting another one of your romantic pieces! You fooled me with this one! Very good!

Denise
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2 posted 01-21-2000 04:56 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Apaulds! This is great Sailor...I think you win first prize!...lmao
Balladeer
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3 posted 01-21-2000 09:36 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Geesh! You would think with all the times this has happened to Toe, he would stop nibbling on their necks!!! Great (and accurate) response, LngJohn!
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 01-21-2000 09:46 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

ROFLMAO...well, this definately wasn't what I had in mind when I posted the challange...but thanks for the laugh. Good one  
Nan
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5 posted 01-22-2000 08:34 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

You're incorrigible!!!
Munda
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6 posted 01-22-2000 08:42 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

ROFLMAO ! Thanks ! Great poem.  
LngJhnAg
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7 posted 01-22-2000 09:32 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Thank you all, but please hold the applause.  Ol' Toe is the one who inspired this romantic poem.  I owe him the credit for this tearful story of romance and heartbreak.

[This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 01-22-2000).]
Echo Rhayne
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8 posted 01-22-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

ok LoL, fooled me up until the 3rd line LoL.  hehehe  Anyone got a saftey-pin so we can pop Toe's date?  

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


Martie
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9 posted 01-22-2000 02:03 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Love is found in such strange places
plastic, paper or mylar faces
who are we to judge the way
other people choose to play  

Toerag
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10 posted 01-22-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

I wasn't dancing you damned old sailor!
I was shadow boxing with my blow up doll,
I guess I got too carried away,
when she popped and hollered "foul!"

I didn't bite her neck ya see,
No it wasn't her neck that blew,
I bit off a part of her right ear,
Mike Tyson's book on boxing's really cool.
Pepper
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LOLOL....
Well done LngJhn....
LngJhnAg
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12 posted 01-22-2000 09:53 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Hey there, ya reprobate!  yanno, I think I really believe you about the Mike Tyson stuff  (your secret's safe with me, Toe).

Nice reply, Martie.  And its always good to get a compliment from the ever vivacious Pepper.  As for you, Toe - well, I guess I gotta get a compliment from you, too - but I don't like it because I always think its a trap (and it always is - lol).

 
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