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Parker
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0 posted 2000-01-21 04:02 PM


Raven Queen                                  
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I fall asleep to vivid dreams                
Of the one I call the Raven Queen            
She calls to me in the pale moon light      
True Lovers of a long ago Life              
Her Ebony locks are dark as the night        
And wonderous eye's brighter then bright    
Oh Raven Queen, your all I see                
Run with me to an ocean breeze              
We'd make Love in the sand,                  
of a Far away Land                          
You and me on a southern Sea                
Oh Raven Queen, Oh Raven Queen              
Of my Dreams.                                
                                            
James Parker Haley (c)1993  



[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 01-21-2000).]

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Echo Rhayne
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1 posted 2000-01-21 04:30 PM


I enjoyed this one, touching!  

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~



Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-21 04:40 PM


This is beautiful, James. Very romantic!

Denise

devina
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3 posted 2000-01-21 07:54 PM


SOOOO Beautiful James!!! Me thinks you're quite the romantic!!! The ocean is full of possibilities hun

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Parker
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4 posted 2000-01-21 10:48 PM


devina, thanks very much, yes possibilities I like to believe, and my next possibility is to get out have some oceans of fun... sea you.


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5 posted 2000-01-21 11:14 PM


So very beautiful..I love the flow.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha


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6 posted 2000-01-22 09:11 AM


another fine Raven poem  
Parker
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7 posted 2000-01-22 07:39 PM


Alwye, thank your very much.

Hoot just one more, its just a small didy.

Parker

Anne
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8 posted 2000-01-22 07:50 PM


Didn't Shakespeare have a thing for the same sort of "Dark Lady"?  

Look out, lads!  

Corinne
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9 posted 2000-01-23 01:01 AM


oooh, Parker!  This is one time I wish I didn't have red hair!


Corinne

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10 posted 2000-01-23 01:15 AM


Haleyja....very romantic......us redheads are cool too..... -SEA
Parker
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11 posted 2000-01-24 11:14 AM


Thanks Anne, I think all women have this dark mysterious nature.

Corinne, no I love Red haired women, just was not lucky enough to ever date one. So .... you live where.  

SEA, thanks, yes I think you are really cool too.

Parker

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