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...Of Love and Hate

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Vampire'sMistress
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0 posted 01-21-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for Vampire'sMistress   Email Vampire'sMistress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Vampire'sMistress

As evening falls around us
we're both too young to die
seeing your smile breaking
I hope and watch and cry

The night is getting darker
your beauty I will miss
there's nothing more to watch now
but still we do exist

Then-in the darkest hour
while no sound can be heard
and as i think it's over
I hear the singing of bird

See me growing now stronger
the morning will arise
the evil lives no longer
a phoenix never dies

VM



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One Who Understands
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1 posted 01-21-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

Beautiful poem
Marilyn
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2 posted 01-21-2000 04:22 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Very nicely done. If you don't mind...your title inspired me.

Of love; it's passions sweeter side,
It's gentleness like rain.
It soothes the hurting part of us,
And wins out over pain.

Of hate; it's bitter and rebuke,
It's passion gone arye.
It's hurtful and it does consume,
All that is close by.

In all we do within our lives,
These feelings we must temper.
For either left to run amuck,
Can kill as if were pepper.

(was stuck on a rhyming word at the end there. Thought of too much pepper spoils the broth. No reference to our sweet Pepper...lol)

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 01-22-2000 08:53 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I liked this, especially the final stanza
Vampire'sMistress
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4 posted 01-26-2000 07:35 AM       View Profile for Vampire'sMistress   Email Vampire'sMistress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Vampire'sMistress

thx to @ll of you!
marylin: sure I do not mind. your poem is beautiful!

Carpe Noctem,
VM
(who is unfortunately so busy at the moment so that she cannot try to write a new one ..only a few more days and than she hase 2 weeks free..yeah)

 ~our lifes are nothing but words written with a stick in water~
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