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The Storm

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SEA
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0 posted 01-21-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


Lightening strikes
my heart beats faster
then comes rain
loud like laughter

On my face
I feel a slap
but it was just
a thunder clap

A deadly voice
calls my name
it's only the wind
but still the same

When the storm is through
then I'll be free
from the weather of feelings
so deep in me.
-SEA-
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Nicole
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Aye, sometimes weathering the storm of our own emotions is much more trying than any tempest.  Excellent work here!
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2 posted 01-21-2000 01:39 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is fantastic, SEA! Very well done. Those storms can be scarey!

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WOW!!! Very to the point...yet ever so clear

Excellent
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Satiate:Thank you, glad you liked it!

dsnyder: Those storms rage still.(Thank you for the praise)

One Who Understands: Thanks!
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Sea...we all have to weather our own storms, but thankfully, like the young ash tree, we bend and do not break

 At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato
 
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