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Brush and Canvas

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Corinne
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Brush and Canvas


The eyes drop
soft canvas
the brush moves to explore
each valley and
rolling hill
light and dark
stopped
frozen
defined
by each shadow and touch

two play as one


What is it?
Why do you look
Away?
What tears
should you hide from
my face?

What secrets lie within
that brush and paint reveal
But I cannot see?

The brush finds paint
and dips into Blue
away from the canvas

It paints my love upon you


June 1999
Tyre Olson and Corinne Bailey


© Copyright 2000 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-20-2000 11:36 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Such strong sentiment and meaning in such few words. Excellent writing.
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Beautiful, Corinne! You paint such a beautiful picture!  

Denise
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I'm left in ahw!  So wonderfully thought out
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Corinne...Picasso has nothing on you  
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Corinne-

I chanced to see this
'masterpiece' and judged
it Best Of Show
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Corinne
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Thank you all, you are too kind.


Corinne
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Corinne, your poetry paints such wonderfull images. I really loved this piece.

Parker
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...another masterpiece...
 
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