You are one extrememly talented poet. I fully expect to see your name in print one of these days.
I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Beautiful, flowing, exquisite rhythm and rhyme, crystal clear imagery; your words catch me and sweep me along in the white water of your emotion.
I had lived three or four decades before the deep and painful emotions that had swept me along all my life, began to finally appear in my words, clearly and keenly. It took that long to find how to describe them like this! It was like discovering how to read invisible ink messages, after waiting a lifetime.
...Living is ever like crossing rivers; finding a new life on each shore ... RJG
Yes, I do believe you've been bitten Kevin. Absolutely lovely work.
~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha
Guelph, Ont. Canada