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Kevin
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0 posted 01-20-2000 10:44 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

your love flows with the current
and I am washed away
the stream that in the past ran calm
grows brisker with the day.

I can not tread the water
your heart too strongly calls
and I know I can not help it
as Iím plunging down the falls


© Copyright 2000 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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1 posted 01-21-2000 01:30 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

WoW Kevin, deep.  Short and to the point!  I love the imagery in this one!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


Denise
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2 posted 01-21-2000 01:33 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Another great one, Kevin! Lovely!  

Denise
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3 posted 01-21-2000 02:06 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Grinning like a cheshire cat here...oh Kevin, beautiful!! Me thinks you have been bitten my friend  

 At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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4 posted 01-21-2000 03:25 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

You are one extrememly talented poet.  I fully expect to see your name in print one of these days.

I thoroughly enjoyed this one.  Beautiful, flowing, exquisite rhythm and rhyme, crystal clear imagery; your words catch me and sweep me along in the white water of your emotion.

I had lived three or four decades before the deep and painful emotions that had swept me along all my life,  began to finally appear in my words, clearly and keenly.  It took that long to find how to describe them like this!  It was like discovering how to read invisible ink messages, after waiting a lifetime.




 ...Living is ever like crossing rivers; finding a new life on each shore ... RJG


devina
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5 posted 01-21-2000 05:12 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Very romantic, you young talent, and to think we have you all to ourselves!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Parker
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... the old black rum


6 posted 01-21-2000 11:57 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

This is different, no saddness, please more
Master Kevin.

Parker
Alwye
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In the space between moments


7 posted 01-21-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Yes, I do believe you've been bitten Kevin. Absolutely lovely work.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

~ViXeN~
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8 posted 01-22-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for ~ViXeN~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~ViXeN~

kev, i love this one! =)
its so beautiful!
 
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