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SEA
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0 posted 01-20-2000 10:37 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


Tell me how you do it
show me the way
to break someone's heart
then just walk away

You do it so easy
what's your trick?
You do it so easy
you make me sick

How do you know
who it will be?
What do you look for?
What do you see?

Share with me your secret
then tell me how you can
do what you do
and still call yourself a man
     -SEA-
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Echo Rhayne
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1 posted 01-21-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

OUCH!  

but but but I dont call myself a man hehe, oh ooops there I go again being so vain, this wasn't about me was it?  *singing* "you're so vain, I bet you think this song is about you, don't you, dont you"

*sigh*  oh well, I guess Im glad that it's not hehe!  

but a little serious now, great poem, the flow, everything.  Hope it helped to get some of that out  

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


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2 posted 01-21-2000 01:44 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I think they have something like sonar or something...they always seem to hit their mark. And they're not men, not even close...more like sharks!
Great poem!!

ROFL @ Echo's reply....I love that song...now I'm singing it, too! hehehehehe

Denise
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3 posted 01-21-2000 01:48 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

Do I sense a little sarcasm?

Wow...such a harsh, yet real way of sharing what you think of this guy.

I love it
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4 posted 01-21-2000 01:57 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

One Who Understands: No sarcasm only anger at a jerk who thought he was a "man".  
hoot_owl_rn
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The only problem is Sea, the ones who fit this description are not smart enough to realize it targets them...sorry guys, not male bashing here, I mean men and women alike, for both sexes break heart, use, and hurt equaly
devina
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6 posted 01-21-2000 02:35 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I'm glad to see the anger, at least we know you're not still LOVING him!!! You tell him girl!!! Great poem and show of emotion!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
 
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