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Show ME The Way |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Tell me how you do it show me the way to break someone's heart then just walk away You do it so easy what's your trick? You do it so easy you make me sick How do you know who it will be? What do you look for? What do you see? Share with me your secret then tell me how you can do what you do and still call yourself a man -SEA- |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
OUCH! but but but I dont call myself a man hehe, oh ooops there I go again being so vain, this wasn't about me was it? *singing* "you're so vain, I bet you think this song is about you, don't you, dont you" *sigh* oh well, I guess Im glad that it's not hehe! but a little serious now, great poem, the flow, everything. Hope it helped to get some of that out  ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I think they have something like sonar or something...they always seem to hit their mark. And they're not men, not even close...more like sharks! Great poem!! ROFL @ Echo's reply....I love that song...now I'm singing it, too! hehehehehe Denise |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Do I sense a little sarcasm? Wow...such a harsh, yet real way of sharing what you think of this guy. I love it |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
One Who Understands: No sarcasm only anger at a jerk who thought he was a "man". |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
The only problem is Sea, the ones who fit this description are not smart enough to realize it targets them...sorry guys, not male bashing here, I mean men and women alike, for both sexes break heart, use, and hurt equaly |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I'm glad to see the anger, at least we know you're not still LOVING him!!! You tell him girl!!!  Great poem and show of emotion!!!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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