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tori
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0 posted 01-20-2000 10:11 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

In a bleak November autumn mist,
with haze of amber hues
My lips touched by a crimson kiss
That pulled me in the muse

Through day's and years I fair the well
Bound by bitter ties
As a captured bird with wounded wing
That kept me close at side

Singed, by verse my ears were cursed
With all as black as night
As darkness filled the hollow hull
And took away my sight

Drunken by the empty lies
That slivered from your tongue
I felt my life get swept away
As line and verse were one

Tori 2000

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WhtDove
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1 posted 01-20-2000 11:32 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Tori, these are sad but so well written. And touch the heart! Well done my friend!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


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2 posted 01-20-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

enjoyed very much, Tori.
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 01-21-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tori-
I really enjoyed the flow of this.
Seemed to follow the path of a tear.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nicole
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4 posted 01-21-2000 12:30 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

I've got one word for you my friend...thinking!  

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
Denise
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5 posted 01-21-2000 01:37 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Well done, indeed, Tori!  

Denise
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6 posted 01-21-2000 01:43 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

Very interesting...and well put
hoot_owl_rn
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Very well written tori  

 At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato
wayoutwalt
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8 posted 01-21-2000 02:27 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

love the last line tori very nice!
tori
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9 posted 01-21-2000 09:26 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Dove, Balladeer, Marge, Nicole,Denise,One Who,Ruth and Walt..Thanks so much for the kind words glad you like this one..

Nicloe....Really Glad to hear your thinking!!


~~~~~~~~~~
If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
vlh.
Nan
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10 posted 01-22-2000 08:02 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very nice work, tori..... and if November is bad, try January and February, eh???
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