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Sitting on the beach (for my children)

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Munda
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Sitting on the beach, listening to the roaring of the sea, watching
every wave wash ashore, only to return to the arms of its mother,
feeling her tender touch reaching out for all life between the naked
sand, feeling her love for each and every living creature within her,
makes me realize once more; I truly love you, from deep within.
Strong and powerful as her waves; tender as her touch, reaching out to
you, as her waves gently reach out to touch the sand,  soul to soul;
roaring, for I want the world to know how magnificent it feels
to experience this love; fulfilled with a feeling of complete and utter
love for all that is within me, as it is you who are so much within and
part of me; and because of you, life is a better and sweeter thing and
tears fill my eyes, when I think of the love and meaning you bring into
my life.

Munda  


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Nicole
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1 posted 01-20-2000 06:01 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Oh...my...goodness!     I adore this poem, truly there is no feeling like the love for one's children!  *sigh*  Thank you for the smiles.

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
Mike
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2 posted 01-20-2000 06:30 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Very nice.  I enjoyed.
hoot_owl_rn
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Munda...this is very sweet....there is nothing like a mothers love for her children  
Pepper
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This is so lovely Munda....I feel the passionate emotions of mothers'love, so evident in this piece...

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
  Shannon


  


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Denise
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5 posted 01-20-2000 07:08 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This made me all warm and happy inside. Thanks, Munda!!  

Denise
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Beautiful Munda my friend.  
PhaerieChild
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Munda, incredibly beautiful!! You have captured the feelings I hold for my children as well in this piece. Very enjoyable!!

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


Nan
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8 posted 01-21-2000 07:55 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I always say "Don't mess with motherhood".... You say it much more eloquently....
Munda
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Thank you all for reading and your very kind replies. Yes, kids sure are a treasure and give beyond measure...trouble too LOL.
SnglDad
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10 posted 01-22-2000 08:47 AM       View Profile for SnglDad   Email SnglDad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SnglDad

Very sweet and heart warming  
Being a father of 3 I can relate to this.
You have really put alot of feeling`s into this and I thank you for sharing.
God Bless

                                    Joel
 
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