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Tears From Nobody

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One Who Understands
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0 posted 01-20-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for One Who Understands

Tears from Nobody

As I close my eyes, and flip off the light,
I wish you could be in my arms tonight.
I'd hold you close, close to my heart,
I'd never let go, we would never part.
My heart aches, and my eyes fill with tears.
As I think back on all those years.
All the pain I've been through.
All the pain that you never knew.
Pain that will never exist to you.
I can't hold it in, they just keep flowing.
You'll never know what love I have for you.
All the love, I'll never stop showing.
The tears sting, as they flow down my cheek.
I pray to God, only to remain weak.
I ask him why must it hurt so much.
And in my dreams he tells me,
"Son, because you love her such."
I'm so alone, I have nowhere to go,
I don't know what to do.
When I close my eyes, there you are.
God, if only you knew.
How much I want to be with you.
Admiring your smile.
More perfect than paradise, where the ocean meets the sand.
Your beautiful eyes match the sky,
So magnificent, so grand.
Your soft golden hair,
More gorgeous than the evening sunset.
You amazed me beyond my imagination,
On that wonderful day our hearts met.
Princess, please don't leave me.
My heart may never mend.
If you say no,
The pain will never end.


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fc
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1 posted 01-20-2000 04:03 PM       View Profile for fc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fc

glad to see it here   it is pain filled but beautiful and well done
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I agree! Well done!  

Denise
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Sometimes I think this is one of the best benifits of writing poetry, to be able to express our pain like this.

 At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato
devina
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4 posted 01-20-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Welcome to passions...I'd tell you this was purdy, but it's more than that!! So full of pain and wanting- you hang in there!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
~ViXeN~
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well done! what a lucky girl to have someone feel so strongly about her.... beautifully written.!
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6 posted 01-20-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

I'd have to bet there are a million girls lined up and waiting for a love so sweet!
  -SEA
One Who Understands
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7 posted 01-21-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

Very flattering...thank you SEA

And thank you all for understanding

 
Nicole
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I agree w/ everyone, and especially Hoot...there's a certain fufilling release found in writing poetry.  Excellent work!
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One Who Understands-

I skipped down to Feeling Forum and found you and then back to Open #5 and glad you are here.

Hope your heart begins to heal.  
Smiles sent your way from this lady.

Welcome to Passion's wonderful family
of friends.  I sense that you will be
very, very welcomed here.
~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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