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Broken heart

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0 posted 01-20-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for Ayla   Email Ayla   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ayla

I fell in love with him when I was sixteen
He was the most sincere man I've ever seen.
Even though we were ten years apart.
I still loved him with all my heart.
On that beautiful day,out of the blue
he said he felt the same way too.
I felt like the happiest person on earth.
who found her one and only true love.
A young girl and an older man.
The test of love can we withstand?
I thought we could for I loved him so.
Never imagined he would be the one to let go.
It seems that he was lonely without a mate.
Happened to run into me so we began to date.
He felt in his heart that he had fallen for me.
But his affections were nothing more than brotherly.
I may be young,but I'm capable of loving.
He really broke my heart when he left that evening.

What's a girl to do with a broken heart ?
It's not easy to make another start.
I never knew that love could be so hard.
I thought it means never having to part.
The worst is when .. you are left with
a broken heart ...

 Yesterday is history.Tomorrow is a mystery.Today is a Gift.That's why we call it The Present. - The Millennium Bug

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1 posted 01-20-2000 02:17 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

My first love was alot older than me, and to this day, I thank him for letting me go and learn to be the woman I am now.  It may hurt now, but eventually you'll see that it was better for you both.  You never know- fate may step in later in life if he's the one that's really meant for you!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 01-20-2000 04:09 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Priscilla, so many poems about broken hearts, Marge still might have some band-aids lef tover though    no but seriously, this is touching, so many feelings!  

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

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3 posted 01-20-2000 05:22 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, love can break your heart and probably will again. Each time it will mend and be the stronger for it. Your poem is beautiful.

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4 posted 01-20-2000 06:27 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Broken hearts heal, they just take time  
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