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kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
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0 posted 2000-01-20 11:55 AM


Whispers in the Night

Strangers at first glance
Looking for some romance
Strangers at first light
Whispers in the night.

Meeting at the bars
Kissing underneath the stars
Saying things in flight
Whispers in the night.

Together we hope to stay
Afraid of things to say
Knowing now is right
Whispers in the night.

The time has come to hesitate
It’s all over it’s to late
To say the things we might
Whispers in the night.

© Copyright 2000 Kathy Harmon - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 2000-01-20 12:05 PM


Very good rhythm to this one  
Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-20 12:14 PM


Sometimes it is over too soon...
Nice poem!

Denise

Nan
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3 posted 2000-01-21 06:56 AM


...and you know what they say about those who hesitate...
PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
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New Orleans, LA
4 posted 2000-01-24 09:54 AM


Hello KitKat...i love this poem. Very sensual. I'm still trying to learn how to navigate in here, its kind of confusing.

Jerry

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
5 posted 2000-01-24 06:31 PM


Thanks JML. e-mail me and let me know what you think!

 You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel. Carol King


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