"...slide away with the tide" That was a sad poem, and this was my favorite line. But...friend..The tide always comes back at some point doesn't it? That thought makes your poem hopeful when I read it. Beautifully done.
Don't gain my affections and cover my eyes. In blindness I will only swing harder.
Dear Temptress Thankyou for your reply..I'm new at this and this poem was my second submitted. So to see a reply was fabulous. and yes every now and again the tide does slide back in and it is painful but I am over him thankfully. Once again thanks