How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #5 Archive
 It Tickles
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

It Tickles

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 08-30-99
Posts 1829
Aloha, Oregon


0 posted 01-20-2000 03:12 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PhaerieChild

There, that's better. Ahh comfort!
No, don't move. Stop!! that tickles!!
There, okay, that's perfect.
I can feel your heartbeat.

Thundering in your chest.
It sounds so soothing but..
Stop!! That tickles!!
Thank you...much better.

What? Oh honey, I love you too.
I hear your tummy growlin'.
Are you hungry? Want a sandwich?
Okay, I'll just try to sleep.

Alright!! Enough already!!
Stop it!! It tickles!
No wait!! It isn't your chest hair.
I thought it was....I'm sorry.

It was your love just tickling my heart.


 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


© Copyright 2000 Shawna R. Holder - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 09-17-99
Posts 1538
Canyon Country, CA


1 posted 01-20-2000 03:14 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Awwwww this is beautiful!!  heartwarming and touching!!!


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 07-17-99
Posts 8273


2 posted 01-20-2000 06:40 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Just so lovely!

Created a perfect moment of shared love - well done, WC!



 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
Meadowmuse
Member Elite
since 12-27-1999
Posts 3317


3 posted 01-20-2000 06:44 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

This really is so sweet...gave me a smile this morning...nicely done!

Dear LadyClaire


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 01-20-2000 10:09 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

this is cute, it made me smile  
PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 08-30-99
Posts 1829
Aloha, Oregon


5 posted 01-20-2000 10:50 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Echo...thank you for your kind words

Severn...I do have to admit that these shared moments are special to me. Thank you

Claire and Ruth...I'm glad I could evoke a smile. Thanks for for your replies.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 08-30-99
Posts 1829
Aloha, Oregon


6 posted 01-20-2000 10:50 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Echo...thank you for your kind words

Severn...I do have to admit that these shared moments are special to me. Thank you

Claire and Ruth...I'm glad I could evoke a smile. Thanks for for your replies.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


Local Rebel
Member Ascendant
since 12-21-1999
Posts 5742
Southern Abstentia


7 posted 01-20-2000 10:54 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Me and my dirty mind.  I didn't expect it to turn mushy...

Very nice work here  
PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 08-30-99
Posts 1829
Aloha, Oregon


8 posted 01-20-2000 11:27 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

To be honest Rebel when I first set out on this piece it was to be written for the adult forum. While I don't post there often I thought "What the hey?" Sometimes things just don't turn out that way, so mushy it is lol

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 08-22-99
Posts 23002


9 posted 01-20-2000 12:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Mushy but oh so sweet!  

Denise
Earthtones
Junior Member
since 01-18-2000
Posts 10


10 posted 01-20-2000 12:51 PM       View Profile for Earthtones   Email Earthtones   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earthtones


Thanks, that was very sweet, it gave me a warm glow inside.
PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 08-30-99
Posts 1829
Aloha, Oregon


11 posted 01-20-2000 09:32 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Denise and Earthtones....thanx for all your kind words. I sometimes like mushy/sweet.
Sorta like a sticky bun. Mushy and oh so sweet!!! LOL I think I hear my kitchen calling me...

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 06-05-99
Posts 26302
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA


12 posted 01-20-2000 11:20 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Mushy is good. The world needs more mushy!!!!
SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 01-18-2000
Posts 24152
with you


13 posted 01-21-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

You have to love the sweetness of this poem!-SEA
One Who Understands
Member
since 01-20-2000
Posts 252
Cedar Rapids, Iowa


14 posted 01-21-2000 02:16 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

After that last line...I was filled with "HOW SWEET"

Truly a sweet poem...I hope someday I will have a wife who will say something like that to me
devina
Member Elite
since 10-28-1999
Posts 3189
Northern Cali


15 posted 01-21-2000 02:38 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

AAWWW!! Now were all get mushy in here!!! Cute poem Shawna!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 09-21-1999
Posts 28608
California


16 posted 01-22-2000 08:00 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is precious.
Songbird
Member Elite
since 12-15-1999
Posts 2211
California


17 posted 01-22-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

Very sweet, we all need our hearts tickled!
PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 08-30-99
Posts 1829
Aloha, Oregon


18 posted 01-23-2000 10:16 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

'Deer...I agree, mushy is good

Sea...thanks for reading and the compliment.

One Who Understands...It takes kissin' a bunch of toads to get a prince (or princess) but when it happens it is bliss.

Devina, Martie and Septsong, thanks for your kind words. We all need to be tickled occasionally.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


Eloise
Senior Member
since 11-27-1999
Posts 1115
Wyoming


19 posted 01-23-2000 10:21 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

WildChild,  hate to be repetitive, but this was sweet.  Really enjoyed the read.  Thanks.  
Tramp Poet
Senior Member
since 01-06-2000
Posts 786
Could Be Anywhere...


20 posted 01-23-2000 01:01 PM       View Profile for Tramp Poet   Email Tramp Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tramp Poet's Home Page   View IP for Tramp Poet

mushy and sweet, from my sister?
oh, the end is near...
Loved the piece, sis
made me jealous of the muffin man, again!
Love y'all,
b


  there is only one...
Romans 10:9-10
Bad Boy
Member
since 01-23-2000
Posts 83


21 posted 01-23-2000 01:34 PM       View Profile for Bad Boy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bad Boy

Well Im glad you weren`t saying this during ....well you know.
Me and my Bad Boy way`s had a different ending before I had even finished reading.
Very sweet



 The Devil Made Me Do It.

 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #5 >> It Tickles Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors